Playing hide-and-seek
Body image distortion
Finds a poor refuge
Bulimia precursor
When found, no one will find out
This is a little something for Helene’s weekly photo challenge (5-7-2019). It is a Tanka having 5 lines with a syllable count of 5-7-5-7-7 and no rhyme!
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wow, a tanka is a toughie, but u did a great job!
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Thanks! I like Tanka and haiku but they are hard to do well…
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Only a child would think they were hidden there. lol Great image.
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Thanks Bonnie! The words are mine and the photo belongs to Helene’s challenge!
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Loved how the photo paired with the poem. Also the interplay of hiding one’s body and hiding one’s illness. What is Helene’s weekly photo challenge? Was the poem ekphrastic as well as a Tanka? 🙂
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There is no link to the challenge murisopsis, I do hope it will be alright for me to leave a link here since Joan is asking.
https://helenevaillant.com/2019/05/07/what-do-you-see-may-7-2019/
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Thank you! 🙂
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You are welcome.
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Thanks Helene! I was posting it late last night and simply forgot to include the link – I fixed it so now there’s a link in the post!!
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It happens to me too sometimes. Thank you. I hope you will enjoy reading the roundup entries. 🙂
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I read some this morning and I’m going to visit some more this evening!
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They are all wonderful! Have a good evening.
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I didn’t intend it to be ekphrastic but I suppose it could be interpreted that way if you squint really hard. Helene left a link in her reply and I added the link in my post… An oversight since I was writing the post at midnight and was a tad exhausted…
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A fabulous Tanka, murisopsis. Hiding has different aspects, you wrote it beautifully.
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Many thanks for the compliment and the prompt! Sometimes you just need a nudge and this photo was just that!
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Yes, this photo captivated many hearts. Thank you for participating.
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It was my pleasure!!
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Such a wonderfully creative take on the image and how apt the message.
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Thanks Inky! I’m tickled you liked it!
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You are kindly welcome. 🙂
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Such a sweet photo!
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You’ll have to thank Helene for that – it was part of the prompt…
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Tough to do. Great job.
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Many thanks for the compliment!
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