Once again Kim Hawke’s MMPP has truly kicked me in the pants. The first prompt I considered was: Explore the quantum, in whichever version appeals to you. After mulling that over for 2 weeks I stared to compose only to have another prompt: Investigate mothers sneak into my mental gymnastics. I present a Kyrielle.
A mother’s love creates a bond
Within the womb and far beyond
Love two souls entwine and cement
A strong quantum entanglement
A daughter knows her mother’s voice
With hugs and kisses will rejoice
Know near or far the heart’s intent
A strong quantum entanglement
We know not how or why its so
Through time and space all mothers know
If the babe is ill or content
A strong quantum entanglement
Death comes knocking upon our door
Parts the embrace for evermore
The soul in joy will not lament
A strong quantum entanglement
A Different Perspective 
Lovely.
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Thanks Carrie! I’m pleased you think so!
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Wow! Very powerful and potent.
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A ton of thanks Dodi! I’m tickled pink that you found these words powerful!
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Clever, Muri! I like how you’ve braided the two prompts. How love and connection remain constant in all circumstances, even death. How moms “just know” things from hundreds of miles away. 🙂
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Many warm greetings and a thanks for the compliment!! It is true – my mother and I (and my sisters too) are often on the same wave length…
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Gestation leads to unwavering links such the relationship between the electrons and the nucleus of the atom!
Love ❤
Michel
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Thanks Michel! It is ever so that the knitting in the womb cannot unravel…
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I love the second verse of this poem. Have a great day.
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Thanks so much! I like that stanza too!
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Your welcome.
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Wonderful! I can hear your experience and the universal, too. & quantum love. So it ever was.
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Thanks Kim! I enjoyed this one – it took a turn that I wasn’t planning but seems the universe had a different plan!
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& that right there, is what keeps me coming back to poetry. The call and response ‘effect’.
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That is in itself another poem! We shout into the void of space and the universe answers. Not an echo of our voice but a larger more complete sound…
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Ohhhh how I love this one!!! AMUST for your book but needs a title! I would love to share this one too since we just had mother’s Day. What do you call this poem the title I mean?
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Quantum Entanglement? Go ahead and share if you want and I’ll add it to the book compilation…
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Lovely, mine isn’t as good. I’m not much of a poet. https://wordpress.com/view/crazywitch25.wordpress.com
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Thanks much! I will go see your post but I bet you are underestimating your abilities…
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I was right – you have underestimated your poetic talents!
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absolutely love it! That repetition of the last line gives it emphasise.
A mothers love can be profound … wish more knew it!
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Thanks tons Kate! The kyrielle is good for that – putting the emphasis on that last line. Yes having a positive relationship and unconditional love from your mother is priceless and should be a given. But in this world it isn’t always so….
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Love this one…
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Thanks Elizabeth! My mother is insisting I put it in the book…
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Oh wow!!!👏👏👏👏your really nailing all his prompts…while i am still stuck with my math poetry…lol
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Thanks! The math was a tough one for sure but as my father once told me “Math is everywhere.” I didn’t see it then but I can see it now…
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I am done with it now..but still not happy about it..lol..
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I’m happy that you’ve finished even if you are not satisfied. We are our own worst critics. I can’t wait to read what you’ve created!!
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Beautiful post! I’m very close to my mother and don’t know what I’d do without her.
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Thanks Cherie! I’m so glad that even though you have gone through fire you had your mother on your side!! Too many don’t have that connection.
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I know and I feel so bad for those who don’t! I just can’t imagine the pain.
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I do believe the presence of a loving support network (even if it a network of one) can be the difference between surviving or falling into suicide.
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You’re absolutely right about that! 💯
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Thank-you Cherie! I love being right but less so when it means that so many are at risk…
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I completely understand. ❤
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My mother can still tell, at the inflection of my voice, how my life is going.
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Ha! Mothers always can tell. If one of the boys is fibbing I can tell – they give themselves away. They would hate me if we played poker as I believe I know all their little “tells”… It is a mom thing!
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