Cloud shadow quickly flees
Slipping through my fingers
Past, present, and future
Anguish and bliss pass away
The End of Summer scavenger hunt prompt #5 is to write a Naani on the topic of time. The Naani is a poem form from India. It is syllabic written in 4 lines with a total of 20 -25 syllables total. Like the Haiku it doesn’t rhyme. The poem is not bound to any specific subject but usually depicts human relations and current events. I chose a syllable count of 6/6/6/7 for my lines for a total of 25 syllables.
Time is a slippery thing. No sooner than we grab hold of now, it becomes then. As hard as we strain to reach the future, it is always a nanosecond beyond our fingers. As we reach, it slides into our touch to become the present and sublimes instantly to become the past. The problem with time is that humans have the capability to remember what just was and to long for what may be. That means we are constantly dragging the past into our present via nostalgia and persistent reminiscence. We also hope and anticipate a future formed by wishes and dreams. I am not saying that those abilities are undesirable, on the contrary those traits have built civilizations. On the individual level however if one lives in the past or in dreams of the future alone, the present living is neglected. That neglect robs the person of any new memories and the dreams will remain unobtainable. We find the person in a state of suspended animation – neither living nor dead and just as separated from the rest of the world. The best is to relish this moment. Remember the string of memories and wear them like a beautiful necklace. Place the dreams like flowers in your hair where you can smell their sweet perfume even as you live in this very instant.
This is so beautiful my friend. I love the poetry style. And your words hit straight to the heart today. ❤️💛💚
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Thanks for the kind words! Time is fleeting and we must make the most of the moments – all of them big and little!
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Amen!! You’re so welcome!
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Beautifully written, Val. A brilliant Naani. Time is a slippery thing indeed
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I’m tickled that you enjoyed this one! Time is a subject that seems to have endless inspiration for me!
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It’s a great muse indeed 😀
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True that!
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My favorite line is that last one. Time passes, regardless of whether it’s spent in bliss or anguish.
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So glad those words struck a chord! Time is in motion -always!
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My memories aren’t very good, just pieces here and there. As for dreams, I only pray to live long enough to care for my husband as we have no other family that can.
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Bonnie my heart goes out to you!! Hugs to you! ❤
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And you still managed to bring nature into the piece; sweet!
Your paragraph after, has me thinking much, and remembering some stories. Like yesterday, I heard Dr. Jane G. talk about a baby chimp that had found the body of it’s dead mother. He, of course, tried to get her to touch him, and then went above the nest they used to have. He eventually laid down in it and died of a broken heart.
So, do animals know time, or “only” the Present, which is all we all really have.
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I’m tickled that this pleased you! As for the question – we don’t know. Many animals remember – especially noxious events. But the idea that they have the capacity to wish and dream of future events is unknown. Some animals can anticipate as in action = reward but we don’t know if they can imagine a future event and determine different scenarios… So glad this post has gotten you thinking – which is always an interesting event that in my experience leads to a burst of creativity from you!!!
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Fantastic Naani, Val! You slayed this.
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Thanks Punam! The naani is a form that I am starting to really like – for its flexibility!!!
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A beautiful poem. Hope your trip is going well.
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Thanks! The trip was a blast and we had so much fun!!!
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I am so glad.
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I think I already gets the Future, Val! !!
Love ❤
Michel
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By the time I post this reply it will already be history and the future has come and gone! I hope you can hold onto the present!!
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“Wear the string of memories like a beautiful necklace.” Perfect!
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I’m so pleased that this line touched you! Hope you have a lovely double strand of pearls!!
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interesting poem but it’s your explanation that resonates deeply, nice advice at the end 🙂
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Thanks Kate! I like resonance!
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yes, it’s all that counts really 🙂
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Caught myself rushing through this before I realized that was exactly what one should not do. Better to relish this post in this moment…knowing full well, I won’t remember it anyway. All the more reason to enjoy it now.
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Ha! Judy you really know how to twist time into knots – all the better to hold onto those memories! Glad you slowed down (though the words slow and down don’t usually apply to you!)
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I love this naani Val..and your explaination below really took my breath away….
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I’m tickled that you enjoyed the poem and the commentary. I try to explain myself when I feel the poem isn’t able to dig deep enough….
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Thank you for revealing to me this poetry form that I haven’t heard of before! I like your poem very much.
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Thanks Lesley! Welcome to the scavenger hunt – I hope you enjoy all the different forms and the poems being posted by others… maybe you will be inspired to write a couple poems as well – the more the merrier!
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Thank you murisopsis 😊 It doesn’t take much to tempt me to write!
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I have been like a kindergartner, of late, living in the moment. The future does get considered, but it is still the future, and will wait its turn.
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There is much enjoyment that is pushed aside when we don’t allow “the moment” its due!
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Time..yes..slippery and flies. Enjoyed this one.
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Many thanks! I’m so happy that you enjoyed reading this one!! Time is very slippery and once it slips away there is no way to get it back…
Hope you are not overwhelmed with the start of the new school year.
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