Need
Thirst, hunger
Hollow eyed children
Turn to crime to fill bellies
Want
The End of Summer scavenger hunt has as prompt #6 – Write an Oddquain about poverty. The Oddquain is a short, usually unrhymed poem consisting of seventeen syllables distributed 1, 3, 5, 7, 1 in five lines. So this is in keeping with the short Haiku inspired poetry that the first 6 prompts have focused on.
Watching the black and white film version of Charles Dickens’ A Christmas Carol as a child really made an impression on me. In fact it gave me nightmares! The rattling chains of Bob Marley and the depiction of Scrooge’s grave (with the eerie music) was of no account. The scene with the ghost of Christmas Present where beneath his robe are two starving children. The ghost proclaims, “They are Man’s. This boy is Ignorance, this girl is Want. Beware them both, but most of all, beware this boy.” That was what haunted me. It was a very visceral depiction that echoed the story of St. Vincent de Paul as told in the publication Little Pictorial Lives of the Saints, “He went through the streets of Paris at night seeking the children who were left there to die. Once robbers rushed upon him, thinking he carried a treasure, but when he opened his cloak they recognized him and his burden and fell at his feet.”
I was taught that poverty was man-made and not “ordained by God” though there are some who believe that misfortune, illness, and poverty are the result of judgements from God. That said it is also incumbent on me and you and everyone on this planet to work to lift the afflicted. A two pronged approach of education and charity can do wonders. I would posit that another area that we need to address in the fight against poverty is one of social justice – the rooting out of racism, bigotry, economic subjugation, and even voter suppression. Only when we have that kind of society will we see a near elimination of poverty. Only when we can lift up each other can we walk together. (Yes, I admit that I wrote the prompts with those issues I’m passionate about in mind. I hope you can find something in the prompts to feel passionate about…)
I appreciate that you are of the mind that poverty is man-made.
Life has taught me that any of us is closer than we think to destitution.
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There is a lot of grace spread around but it is true that at any moment we could find ourselves in dire straits. However I don’t think it is a judgement from God. And more importantly I do think that as a society and as individuals, we can assist those who by circumstances beyond their control have been thrust into poverty. That said, some folks find poverty by their own poor decisions…
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I’m currently listening to Howard Zinn’s “A People’s History of the United States.” The powers that be have a vested interest in keeping people in poverty. It’s sad and maddening.
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I read that book years ago; it changed the way I look at the world.
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Capitalism is brutal… But it is far better than Communism.
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Loving that you did the prompts out of your worthy passions.
I might add education to the prongs of your fork 😉 As in at least meditation, and maybe roleplaying for raising empathy. Walk a mile in my shoes, child. My skin, my gender, my mind. All the things.
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I don’t know why empathy is disappearing from society. I always tried to instill that in my sons… but I suppose some don’t value it and thus don’t teach it. I wonder (out loud in this space) if there is a time/age frame when it must be taught else it is impossible??
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Oh that’s so raw and heartbreaking. Great take on the prompt! You’re right. That is the correct approach to eradicating poverty. It is man-made after all, just like money
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Yes Shweta, education and charity hand in hand can do wonders…
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I completely agree, Val
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Thanks!
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Some one once told me the bible says there will be poverty always. don’t know the source verses. To me it is Satan’s work.
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Sadly, it’s man’s work.
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Jesus said that we would always have the poor among us… However That doesn’t mean we should just ignore them – we are called to clothe the naked, feed the hungry, give shelter to the homeless, aid the sick and visit the prisoner. Seems the devil is always working to bring man to woe…
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Muri, you have once again demonstrated that we are kindred spirits. We were raised in a privileged (and I don’t mean wealthy) environment where hard work, honesty, and duty were taught; and the means to honor those concepts were provided by a network of family, church and education. Somehow, probably through reading, we came to understand that those opportunities didn’t exist for everyone.
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Yes Judy – we were taught with words certainly but more importantly through actions. It makes me very sad to think that the parents of today’s children are unwilling to teach and model the same to their children…
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Well done this form. It’s trickier than it looks. Especially with the theme of poverty.
I watch A Christmas Carol every year, but the Scrooge version with Bill Murray.
The novel I’ve read a few times though, it’s a very quick and thought provoking read.
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The oddquain is a form that I’ve dabbled in before but like the haiku it is hard to do well – especially for a very loquacious mouse like me! I guess I’m a traditionalist – I prefer the non-comedic version.
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To each his own. Tradition is a great thing, there’s a reason it’s tradition.
Nice to hear between two mice we are covering all bases.
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Hehe! Teamwork!
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“Blessed are you who are poor, for yours is the kingdom of God” Luke 6:20.
Love ❤
Michel
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True. We are all poor in one way or another…
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The one percenters exclusivity depends on keeping the masses poor … they race off into space wasting obscene amounts that could end poverty in most nations!
the wealthy and their institutions do little to rectify the situation … I’ve fed the homeless, befriended the beggars, volunteered in charity shops … we must do our utmost at a practical level, enough talking 🙂
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I agree wholeheartedly. If the billionaires would apply their wealth in ways to benefit mankind instead of stroking their own egos life would be improved around the world!! It has been the trend lately (in the last 20 years) to have government pull back from providing assistance to the poor and disadvantaged – instead local volunteer organizations are told to pick up the slack which means the shrinking middle class is following Biblical teaching of “if you have two coats, give one to the man with none” Pretty soon we will be down to one coat for 5 people!
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sadly I think you’re right …
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(nods) sadly is the proper word for it.
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Another great subject and a great poem. Liked it a lot.
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Thanks tons Zakiah! I’ve been looking at some of the poetry forms from India – a very rich poetic tradition!
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I have adopted the approach of education and charity, in one seemingly intractable case. Charity, to the extent I could manage it, came first. When that started to seem like an endless flood of appeals, I turned to education.
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Yes, it comes back to the old proverb of “give a man a fish and he eats for a day but teach a man to fish and he never goes hungry again”…
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Ooh! This one is sharp and incisive! Excellent oddquain.
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Thanks Punam! Poverty can really be the basis for many sad tales. Les Misérables story all started with a stolen apple for a starving child. I saw a story about homeless children in Mexico City where they huff glue fumes to quell the hunger in their bellies. It makes me weep.
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I love “A Christmas Carol”. I think we all need to do our part. Circumstances lead to poverty…a lot of them not the person’s fault…and once in poverty it is difficult to climb out. We should all help the best we can.
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I once had someone tell me that poor people were poor because they didn’t follow God’s commands. I think I must have looked at them as if they had 2 heads… If everyone helped out when they could, the suffering would be cut in half or even eliminated!
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