So we made it through the month of August without anyone’s head exploding from dealing with all these poetry forms. I’m pleased with all the poetry I wrote and I enjoyed reading your poems. A big round of applause to all who persevered and attempted the End of Summer scavenger hunt! This last poem is for the last prompt – write a Blitz poem on the topic of death. The Blitz poem is kind of a stream of consciousness form but after you have it written you can tweak it a bit to make your point….
Live to Die
To be or not to be
To think is to live
Live fast
Live quickly
Quickly we run
Quickly we fade
Fade like photos
Fade away
Away from the race
Away from work
Work to eat
Work to play
Play at love
Play at life
Life lessons
Life keeps going
Going forward
Going toward the end
End the chaos
End the worry
Worry about family
Worry about debts
Debts owed
Debts not paid
Paid in full
Paid my way
Way to go home
Way it will be
Be calm
Be happy
Happy life
Happy death
Death comes
Death delayed
Delayed by love
Delayed by force
Force of will
Force deathβs hand
Hand me over
Hand up to heaven
Heaven awaits
Heaven not denied
Denied the devil’s due
Denied extra time
Time marches on
Time to die
Die we must
Die to live
Must
Live
“Without a mother one cannot love. Without a mother one cannot die.” β Herman Hesse
without a mother one is not born …
Great blitz Val, you sure blitzed death … I really liked it! My last collection of micropoetry is scheduled for posting in Sept … I know, got to be a troublemaker in every challenge! But if I’m the worst you’ve done alright π
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I was very “into” Herman Hesse in college…. I’m so pleased that you like this one! I’m looking forward to your poems – and it doesn’t really matter if it is after August ends. As I’ve said before – poets are awful at following rules! And you are not the worst – in fact I’d say you are a shining star!!!
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lol I was also into HH then and many others, I was a prolific reader from about age 6 on … now I only really read bloggers π
In about six hours my next post will be a surprise for you π
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Great blitz. Much more concise and better flowing than my own effort.
Congratulations on finishing the hunt!
And here’s to many more.
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Ah Mr. Mouse! I am very gratified that you have compared my effort to yours – because you write really engaging poems! I’m thrilled you participated and hope you join in again come April when it is National Poetry Month!!!
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I do what I can but I don’t have the more human element you do.
I think I’ll be around for April. Thank you again for the hunt!
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Thanks Mr. Mouse for the compliment and for sharing your POV in the scavenger hunt! I hope you can join in in April!!
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Thanks. I hope so too!
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This is so creative! I love all the ideas on death as well as the writing from.
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Many thanks Anita! The Blitz is a fun form until you get to the last 5 lines… so happy you enjoyed this read!
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Wow! I read it fast as if I were thinking it; then I re-read it slowly. I wonder how long it takes you to write these things. It’s probably like the meal I laboriously prepare every evening that’s consumed in minutes.
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Yay! That is exactly how the Blitz should be read – fast (thus the name). It is a fun form but you have to really work at the ending since it is the title and the conclusion… Not the most difficult form as it allows the mind to try to make all sorts of associations – some work others don’t. I bet a dime to a donut that you could do this form!!! Maybe on the topic of riding downhill….
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Wow! Great blitz poem, Val. Congratulations on completing the challenge. π
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Thanks Kitty. I always complete my own challenges – the real kudos go to all of the poets who participated!! I’m tickled that you liked this one – Thanks!
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Yes indeed, Val. You are welcome. π
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It is like in a dream : a lot of ideas come to your mind . And idea chases the other, etc…
Love β€
Michel
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Thanks Michel! The blitz is a sort of stream of consciousness poem allowing the thoughts to come fast but also allows the poet to bend them toward their end!!
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Wow! Neat to see you do the stream of consciousness thing, AND Hesse quoted. I love your surprises.
and thank you for this hunt!!! I always forget that I learn much by doing these. Thank you.
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Kim I always enjoy your poetry and your scavenger hunts (which you haven’t done since COVID) always stretched me beyond my limits (sort of a Stretch Armstrong situation) but I managed to not only learn but grow!! Glad I could return the favor!! As for Hesse, I went through a period in college where I read and re-read Hesse… Glad you enjoyed that one!
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Fantastic blitz, Val! What a finale!
It is amazing that you, Kate and I touched on quite a few common things.
Kudos for running this hunt. Already looking forward to next year.
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There are some folks whose souls touch every so often! Poetry can make that connection! I am a little sad that the ASH/EOS is over… but I’ve got my sights set on April!
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Hesse’s paradox is pretty deep… I guess I think of death as the rhymed couplet at the end of a sonnet, you know, the bit that changes the direction of the whole thing.
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Oh and now I’m going to have to go read some sonnets with that in the back of my mind! I read an awful lot of Hesse in college – and did some serious deep thinking…
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I’d write one but I’m done with deep thinking… π
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I try to kick the habit but I’m never able to stop asking why.
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It takes effort to achieve superficiality. π
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Hehe! And yet many people make it look so easy!
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So many trials and so well you have painted the imagery. Lovely.
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Thank you from the depths of my heart! I’m so glad you liked this one! I hadn’t seen any posts so I went back and realized I missed the art show! So many wonderful paintings! I have always loved the crows – good to see I’m not alone!!
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Interesting Blitz. I may write outside the box and do a Blitz soon-even though it’s September.
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I’d love to see how you weave a poem within this form!!
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