Puppy love was not real just a
Small thing
But a girl’s heart has no tether
Takes wing
Envisions the joy and hope that
Loves bring
As that young man plays tunes on her
Heart’s string
Even when that new love fades
I sing
I was looking at an old elementary year book of my sons’ that has never been claimed to be relocated to their house. It brought back some very funny memories and a few poignant ones. There were 3 young ladies in son#2’s class who had a crush on him in 2nd grade. He considered them friends. They considered him their “boyfriend”. I went to eat lunch with him one day and discovered the little drama going on. He was thrilled to see me and introduced me to his friends. One of the young ladies in question corrected him, “girlfriend” she muttered under her breath. I have very keen hearing. I was amused. After lunch I had a meeting with his teacher and asked her if she was aware of this romantic development. We had a good laugh because the 3 girls hung out together and each one considered him the “boyfriend”. Since the seating only allowed for one on each side there had been some serious vying for position in community circle, reading groups and anytime they lined up. The girls remained friends and when son#2 remained clueless they all three dropped him. And that is the essence of “puppy love” (not to be confused by the 1960 teen version).
So this form is called the Waltmarie. It was created by Candace Kubinec. It is a 10 line poem where the even numbered lines are 2 syllables and the odd numbered lines have no restriction on syllable count. The catch is that the even numbered lines when read sequentially form their own mini-poem!
“Take care of you if I love you”, Carmen tells Jose
Love ❤
Michel
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🙂 Sounds like true love!
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Awww, that’s a cute story/memory.
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It is. Now I look at them and they are 30-something and it is hard to see them when they were so little!
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I get that! All mothers with sons, have similar stories of their son’s “girlfriends”. I have been there too. SO sweet and so memorable!
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It was so long ago but the memories came back like it was yesterday.
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😂 😂 😂 😂
I have seen a few of these “romances” while teaching elementary myself!
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I suppose the teachers see it all the time! Young love! hehehe!
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Sweet poem piece! And thank you for going into the details of the form, or I would have missed reading the 2nd poem. A waltmarie. scary. 😉
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Oh Kim! Is that a challenge suggestion for the next scavenger hunt??!! This time I’m writing them down! I’m happy that you think it sweet and that you read it twice to find the little monorhyme poem within!
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As long as thee allows me to pick and choose my targets in the hunts, I’m game!
(Overheard on NPR this am, “Cache in, Trash out!” I love that, and thought of you. I know you would automatically do this, but I love that someone has made it a thing.)
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We have CITO (Cache In Trash Out) events even! Geocaching is all about making things better while having fun… As for choosing targets – sure! I suppose that can be a thing.
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I love this bit of nostalgia! I still remember those days, only for me it was the other way… She never had a clue! Great poem!
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Thanks! I’m tickled you enjoyed this little trip down memory lane and the poem too!
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Yes I did!
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🙂
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super sweet poem, we all have similar memories and what a challenge! Two poems in one and a bleedin syllable count. I will respond in due time 🙂
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Hehe! So you are intrigued by the waltmarie? I just finished writing the “Pause” challenge – it will post on Monday with a link to your original post….
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much appreciated,
I’ll do the same
when I get game 🙂
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🙂 It posts on Wednesday… but I hope you think it worth the wait!
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lol I now your posting regimentation Val, nothing interferes with that!
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Hehe! I don’t want to mess up the flow – poetry every other day… Wednesday is the next poetry posting. (I am orderly if nothing else!) I think predictability is an under rated characteristic.
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I am the opposite with blogging but predictable in most other things … so predictable my friends know what I will say or do 🙂
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Ha! Sounds like you spend quality time with friends if they know you that well!!
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known most of them for decades, only a few very close ones 🙂
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(nods in understanding) That’s how it usually works…
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A wonderful poem.
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Thanks!
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Your welcome.
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🙂
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I remember having a crush in first grade… I would chase her around on the playground, but I never knew what to do with her when I caught her 😉
Thanks for introducing me to this form!
❤
David
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I think the Waltmarie is a fun form. Glad I could introduce you! Ah, first grade… The Beatles hit “I wanna hold your hand” was on the charts and that’s what all the boys would sing as they chased us. But as it was none of the girls wanted to hold hands and get boy cooties! hehehe!
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Wow! What a sweet memory! And thanks for explaining the form… interesting.
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Thanks Punam! I like this form too. The memories were sweet but so long ago!
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You are welcome, Val.
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🙂
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Hahaha…i really am smiling Val…how time flies by so fast..
And how cute those lovely girls are..i wonder what have they become now..😊😉😉
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Of the 3 I only know about 1 whose mother used to be in a singing group with my BIL. She graduated from college and got married and has 2 children. The other 2 have disappeared into the past… Now I’m wondering too!
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😄😄😄you made me smile..
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🙂
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Hmm..Did Walt love Marie, or did Marie love Walt? I had crushes on girls, from second grade until high school, when things took on a whole new meaning.
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I know there was a Walt but have no idea if the Marie was a person. I think Walt loved poetry!! I think we all went through phases of being “in puppy love”…
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And we always hope for that love! 🙂
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Indeed we do!
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🙂
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