The space heaters have been running in the upstairs every night. Our bedroom gets very cold since it is the corner of the house and there is no wind break. We used to have the bed on the inner wall but had to reconfigure the furniture when we bought new bigger furniture (a long time ago). No matter how many blankets I pile on the bed I’m still cold. Sparky on the other hand is cold until he goes to sleep. Once sleeping his metabolism goes into hyperdrive and he is a furnace. I’ve attempted to snuggle up to him but because I’m cold, he instinctually moves away. I end up chasing him to the edge of the bed… I promised myself that I wouldn’t whine about the heat of summer and I didn’t! But there is no such promise not to complain about the cold!
The following poem is an Espinela. This Spanish form consists of 2 stanzas and 4 end rhymes across 10 lines. Each line is 8 syllables with a rhyme scheme of abba for the first stanza and accddc for the second.
Cold winter air makes clear the sky
Shines down a frozen light from stars
Makes black shadows on snow like scars
Achy bones chill will amplify
Mocks my hopes and dreams of July
My breath is frozen in the air
Come summer quickly is my prayer
Huddled closely to the fire
As flames fade soon to expire
My icy tears exclaim despair
lol – Muri, you have done it again – taking the mickey out of Sparky and in such a loving way nobody can object (although I can’t speak for the man himself). I could tell you a thing or two about being cold in my caravan during winter, or the one day when I opened the door from the inside, and over night snow had piled up outside covering the step and coming right up to the threshold. That was in North Yorkshire. Having escaped the cold to a small apartment in Bonn, I won’t indulge. Stay warm both,
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Brrr! I am completely against the idea of van life and that is just another reason!! Glad you are staying warm. Sparky has been very accommodating by sleeping on my side and then moving over to give me the warm spot – he does love me!
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Being cold is the worst thing.
I’m dreaming of summer with you.
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Yes it is!!! It seems the weather is getting a little strange. We usually have snow that sticks at Thanksgiving but not this year. The temps have been fluctuating like crazy (20 one day and 55 the next), and not as much precipitation… We usually don’t have to water the lawn but this last year it needed it! I hope our dreams of summer keep us a little warm. Again I’m going to make a pledge of no complaining about the heat of summer – but I’ll probably slip up some time in August.
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We’re the other way………. I’m the furnace and Hubby is cold. I welcome his cold hands and feet sometimes to cool me down, but I still throw the covers off while he rolls like a slug in them.
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I was hoping that eventually I’d have “hot flashes” but I never did… Yes I was a little disappointed.
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I thought I’d left all that behind in 2010, but 2016 saw Humphrey’s appearance and one of the side effects of the meds is hot flushes. Ho hum. I’m due to stop taking them in 2029, so they’re with me for a while!
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Yikes. I guess with every medication there are side effects… at least the hot flashes are bearable! I’d love to get warm in an instant! Right now I’m sitting at the computer with the little heater next to me. I may have to break out my “cozy spot” to keep my mouse hand warm. (its a little heating pad in a fuzzy cover that you slip your hand into!)
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I take my meds at night so that I’m not flushing all day like a damn toilet!! It’s not so bad though and I’m used to it now.
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If you are cold on night even with Sparky, Val, perhaps you could get up and ” dance with the Christmas tree in a tango ” ?? ( this is a quote ) 🙂
I wish you a warm and happy new year 2021.
Love ❤
Michel
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Haha! Michel you are very witty! Yes getting up and exercising has happened but I’m usually dealing with a leg cramp – more St. Vitus Dance than a tango! I am staying warm and with my electric fireplace I’m very happy this new year!!! I hope you are able to stay toasty warm this winter too! ❤
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Fortunately, Val, you have a electric dewinteriser. This is helping! 🙂
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Hehe! ❤
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My daughter often has cold hands, which she likes to warm on her parents. I don’t mind it, usually, but my wife can’t stand it…
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Hehe! I know how your wife feels. I’m very sensitive to temperature changes and a cold hand chills me to the bone!
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Wow! I haven’t had anyone warm hands on me in years! 🤣
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My hubby was always cold, and when we had been gifted an electric blanket, he was stunned when I gave it away to someone else. I am the one who uncovers to get some fan time at night, so I didn’t realize he was enthused about using it. I’ve used one when I had a poorly heated bedroom, and it helps. Is there a reason you avoid one?
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There are many who love the electric blanket – but I’ve been very wary ever since my parents had one short out. It didn’t cause a fire but was on its way to one! They had to buy all new bedding because there were burn marks on the sheets and comforter. They were told that they were fortunate not to have been electrocuted… I know that this was way back in the 1970s and that they have probably improved the technology but I’m still not comfortable! I’ll stick to the layers of blankets, my space heater, and Sparky!!
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With Sparky around you shouldn’t be complaining of the cold, Val! 😉
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Hehe! He’s unfortunately not draped across my shoulders…
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I imagined him draped around your shoulders…😂😂
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Hehe! It would be cozy but I don’t think either of us would get much accomplished!
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Hahaha!
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🙂 😀 🙂
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I am never cold. If I start complaining about the cold it’s because it’s really damn cold or I’m sick. Everyone else complains the house is cold and I’m in a tank top and shorts. I sympathize with Sparky.
Love the poem – it evokes some great winter imagery.
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Thanks Patti! I’ve always been a poikilotherm so if it is cold outside I’m cold too!
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I’ve never read an Espinela so apt for the season. Also, I’ve never heard of an Espinela before today. Novelty–while I shiver in my basement hoping the space heater will eventually conquer the cold–is appreciated.
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Kiri I’m so sad to know you are chilled. I’m sitting here in a long sleeved top, sweatshirt, Cuddle Dud fleece wrap and my little space heater is humming. I’m starting to warm up!! I’m thrilled you enjoyed the Espinela – it was my first attempt at this form.
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The cold is just the WORST. Thank the lord for space heaters!!
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W currently have 5 – one in each bedroom and one in the craft room and the computer room! I love my ceramic heaters!
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Ok, for a second I thought you had made the heaters yourself (because I know you do ceramics) and I was very confused 😅
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Hehe! You give me too much credit! I’m not much of a functional potter! The ceramic heaters are much safer than the ones that use oil or have bare electrical coils (like a toaster)!
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🤔 Maybe I should get more… I have one electric heater in my place and I huddle around it all night and don’t move anywhere else. Generally, not productive! But my place isn’t that big… I am thinking about it…
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The electric fireplace puts out lots of heat – so much so that it isn’t comfortable in a small room (had it in the craft room and I was sweating) so it has been relocated to the downstairs family room which is always cold in the winter…
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My version is a little different. 🙂
Cold winter air makes clear the sky
Diamonds in the velvet dark
Shimmering magic, light and spark
the spine of sky, the Milky Way
Soothes my summer’s trammeled soul
My breath makes brief clouds in the air
“Winter forever!” is my prayer
Bootprints mark my way in soft snow
Far south sun shows me where to go.
So short this season, snow so rare.
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You really put me to shame!! Your poetry is so very good, I wish you’d write more of it!!
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No, we’re just different poets! It should be summer-trammeled soul
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Forms brief clouds is better
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I believe it…
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You took this poem and turned it on its head and made it better!!
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I love your poem Martha.
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I am wearing leg warmers in bed with footies. In fact I kept leg warmers on all day with sweat pants while I walked my two blocks.
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I forgot about leg warmers! I have a pair that I will dig out and put on!! I hope those leg warmers have kept you warmer!!
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Wrangler is a furnace himself. We sleep so close together in the truck he snuggles at home.
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Lucky you!
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In the summer I want to get away most of the time. But in the winter I love it.
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Glad you have the option! Stay warm!!
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We are on our way to Houston. It was in the upper 70s earlier.
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At least you are on the way to somewhere warmer!!
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Low was 56 here last night.
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I liked both the poems, Yours, and Martha’s. Martha should write more.
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Thanks Zakiah! I agree that Martha should write more poetry!!!!
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you have my sincere sympathy, I cannot live in such cold! Aced the format 🙂
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Thanks Kate! I’m going to do another one soon as I did like the format. As for the cold, I don’t like it much either but I’ve adapted and so I survive just fine!
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when you have no choice you have to find a way to cope … I much prefer my temperate climate 🙂
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I much prefer your temperate climate too!! Unfortunately it is very difficult in this never ending pandemic to travel!!
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not worth the risk, so very glad I did mine last century 🙂
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Yep. Currently not worth the risk – hoping that in the near future the risk will decrease markedly!
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maybe later in the year, wont be soon here
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Things are closing down again because of omicron. Even in the “red” state of Indiana we’ve seen cancellations of events – the Epiphany concert (4 churches choirs singing individually and as a combined choir) and the progressive dinner…
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yes no singing or dancing here in public or venues … numbers are over the top 😦
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Sadly the same should happen here but our governor is slow off the start as he is still hoping to nestle in Trumps pocket!!!
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ouch, we had news headlines that rump is rich and popular and will take over the states at the next election, stuff of nightmares!
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Same news here. I’m praying that the congress somehow slaps him with the crime of treason and makes him ineligible to hold public office… Not very likely but I can hope.
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hehehe i could imagine Sparky moving away and you moving closer to him… what a fun evening bed race…
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He doesn’t always move away… hehe! And sometimes I catch him!
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I like the rhythm of the poem And yes it has been quite cold these days
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Thanks! I was happy with this poem for a first effort at the Espinela. I’ve located my extra blankets and today is the day they go on the bed (well, my half of the bed anyway).
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What I miss most about summer is having more daylight hours to be outside! Did wonders for my mood! So lonely and cold to be holed up inside!
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True that. I used to have an easier time when working because all the fluorescent bulbs were “sunlight” bulbs that mimicked natural light. Once the kitchen light bulbs need to be replaced that’s the kind I’m getting!!
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I like it to be cold when I sleep. I usually turn on the ac or fan at night.
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Hehe! Yeah, no need to do that here! The bedroom gets quite cold if the space heater is no on… Cold enough that ice can form on the inside of windows!!
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What? No thermal longjohns?
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I have them but they are too uncomfortable to sleep in! I only put them on when I know I’ll be stomping around in the snow!
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