I want to preface this one because if I don’t people will start asking me questions and jumping to conclusions. This poem is not about domestic violence. It is about being loved despite our stubbornness. It is about rejection of love that heals, forgives, comforts. It is about the love our Creator has for us from His point of view…
All rough edges
Your sharp corners poke me
Gently I hold you
Angles pressed in flesh
Uncomfortable
Willingly I hold the points of your pain
My tears will wash clean our mutual hurts
All rough edges
And corners that cut me
Will heal given time
Leave permanent scars
Become a touchstone
Remind me we’re one heart, one mind, one soul
I refuse to believe violence subverts
This is a duodora, a poem form created by Dora Tompkins as a quatorzain (a 14 line poem) composed of 2 septets (7 line stanzas). The poem is syllabic with the following count per stanza: 4/6/5/5/5/10/10. The first line of the 1st stanza is repeated as the first line of the 2nd stanza. The last lines of each stanza rhyme. All other lines are unrhymed. The rhyme scheme is:
A/x/x/x/x/x/b, A/x/x/x/x/x/b
*appreciative applause*
LikeLiked by 2 people
So pleased you liked this one!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great perspective and fun form.
LikeLike
I like to try different forms but this topics is on that I meditate on frequently.
LikeLike
A new form can help you see the same issue a different way 👍
LikeLike
I’m always looking for a different perspective…
LikeLike
So am I 👍
LikeLike
Thanks! 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like this form!
LikeLike
Thanks much! I liked doing it!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
We need poems of hope.
I remember liking this form. Just the right amount of structure. (K)
LikeLike
There is hope for those who look for it. This form was one I enjoyed doing. I may be using it again…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful.
LikeLike
Thank you!🥰
LikeLike
Your welcome.
LikeLike
😁
LikeLike
It’s lovely 🧡
LikeLike
So very happy you appreciated it!
LikeLike
A really appropriate reflection for Lent. Good work!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Dodi, I’m tickled you liked it. This Lent is off to a good start!
LikeLike
well done, Muri 🤗 I love that your poem avoids all names of g-o-d as they only belittle – as tance both Rumi and st John of the Cross knew in their poetic writing. Thanks!
LikeLike
Thanks Barbara.
LikeLike
This is such a cool form! And the poem is in itself wonderful!
LikeLike
Many thanks! So pleased you liked the form and the poem!
LikeLike
Wonderful!!! (glad you prefaced…still wonderful, regardless.) We are Loved, inside, outside, all the sides. ❣
LikeLike
Thanks Kim. Love is the essence!💗
LikeLiked by 1 person
another beautiful form Val…
LikeLike
Thanks tons Mich!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful and reassuring, just like His Love.
LikeLike
Thanks Gary!
LikeLiked by 1 person