Upon a blade
The temperatures freeze vapor
Appears warm in an ice coat
Because few words melt
Rather the god of glass grass
Spreads anxiety and insincerity
Run people
This course finds criticism
Hustle away from responsibility
Even the bushes and buds
Hide but are found
Spring is trying very hard to arrive. It isn’t getting much traction though. As soon as a tree dares push a bud onto a branch, we get more cold. Yesterday there was fog in the evening and this morning everything was coated in a thin glaze of ice. I was looking at the grass and every blade was encased in ice. I know that beneath the ice the grass is still supple but currently it is immobile. I feel that at times I am frozen in place and though everyone around me is running toward their own destinies, I am simply waiting for mine to find me… Which is the better course?
The above is a little free verse since I am feeling a bit trapped. I suppose letting the poetry have some free rein will eventually bring me back to the main road.
I’m enjoying “glass grass” so much. I’ve been repeating it in my head.
Also, I need my first cup of coffee. 🙂
Spring will eventually win out. Hold on.
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I’m gratified that glass grass has caught your attention. Coffee should make all better – and perhaps melt some of those icy blades…
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whichever road, will find you 🤗
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Thanks!
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This is awesome! I loved your free verse! Very nice! ❤
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Thanks tons Carol! I hope you are feeling better and your sense of taste has returned. My sister says her ability to taste sour is broken. When she tastes lemon or pickles all she gets is bitter and salty….
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Feeling trapped is very uncomfortable! May you find what you need! ❤️
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I’m searching high and low (still haven’t found the sock) and it seems I’ve found hope and love and maybe a little bit of spring-like weather. The rain has started and everything has thawed so we are getting the April showers early!
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Yes, to rain and thawing!!
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🙂
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Sun is out here, wind in forecast. My bluebonnets are blooming beautiful. Grass isn’t.
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Bonnie the bluebonnets are a sure sign that spring is on the way! I hope the grass greens soon!
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Wintery here to today in Iowa and back home in northwest Kansas. I am one not to rush my destiny. We are looking at change and I know when the right opportunity comes along it will feel right.
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A wise course of action – or inaction. It is only prudent to wait for opportunity and then to welcome it when it knocks! Hope all your changes are good ones!
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Thank you. I hope they are.
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❤
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It’s a great metaphor, Val! In this area, a big citrus growing area, there are predicted frosts several times a year. The growers used to fire up “smudge pots” to blanket the trees with a layer of smoke that would keep the cold out. The smoke was banned, and they now sprinkle the trees with water — the water freezes on the leaves and flowers (as in your poem), and keep them from freezing below 32 degrees. When the weather warms, so do the trees, and everything becomes vibrant again.
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I think the water is better than the smoke but still begs the question of use during a drought… Anyway that’s a question best left for another time (but I’m biased since I don’t like oranges)…
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It works in the lemon orchards too! And it doesn’t take much water to create a mist that covers the trees!
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Good to know! I guess a fog or mist wouldn’t take too much water. And if it saves the crop then well worth it!
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Val, how beautiful! I love the imagery! I’m feeling it here in Missouri, too. Like the grass, we’ll soon be unfrozen. 🤍💚🤗 can you feel my hugs warming you up?
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Yes the hug was warm! I’m hoping the rain stops soon (though the forecast is rain all night). The bright side is that the rain has thawed everything.
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💛🤗 🌈 great!
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The temps have started dropping and I’ve got my fingers crossed we don’t get snow!!
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Spring is always a back and forth season. I always feel better once it settles in. I don’t think we realize how oppressive winter can be until it goes away. (K)
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Hehe! Nope – I KNOW how oppressive winter can be! I think that as I get older I have less tolerance for the cold… Summer can’t get here too fast!
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It’s the dark that gets to me. Now that there is more light my whole being feels better.
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The grey skies do wear on a soul. We are so sunless for so long each year that my doctor insists on Vit D and calcium supplements!
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Yes I take Vitamin D in the winter too. I’ve had dangerously low levels in the past.
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Just part of living in the sunless frozen north… on the bright side the cold kills off most of the bugs!
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Let me reiterate the offer of my granny flat. I’ve been riding to work in short sleeves and actually sweating on the uphill rid home, in the afternoon.
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I would love to visit – Sparky however has mapped out our next trip. We are headed to Utah where he is going to try to kill me by hiking in 5 national parks. He says they will be easy trails but that’s what he said when we took the “death march” across the desert…
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If you should by chance get to Riverside, PLEASE let me know, and I’ll come to visit you there — it’s about an hour’s drive from here — better yet, I’ll give you directions to come here so you can see the coast!
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Janet I really want to get back to CA but it might have to wait a little while… Not to worry – I will definitely let you know when we plan a trip your way! I so badly want to meet you face to face!!
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I posted a comment and my computer ate it! I want to get back to CA some time soon but Sparky has other plans. When we do make it back to CA I will most definitely let you know and arrange a meet up! I’d love to meet you face to face!
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Teehee- Your computer may have eaten the first comment, but the comment arrived on my computer just before this one! Thanks for making the effort to send it again! I do hope you’ll be able to visit soon I’d also love to meet you, too, perhaps over a nice seafood dinner by the marina at Dana Point, o, if I’m up to it, a geocaching day along the coast, or at the San Diego Zoo — there are lots of possibilities!
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I love zoos, geocaching, seafood and I do want to see Dana Point! But most of all just getting to meet you would be a treat!!
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And for me, too!
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🙂
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I relate to this strongly, Muri
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Seems there are a lot of trapped people… At least I’m not trapped under rubble from a bombed building or trapped between hostile forces. Being trapped in my own mind or by inertia isn’t half as bad!
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Many feel trapped, somehow, in late Winter and early Spring, which are really two parts of a de facto fifth season.
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Hehe! I’m having enough trouble without adding a 5th season – around here it seems we only have 3 seasons, winter, summer, autumn!
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Here, we have summer and winter.
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This year it is winter all the way to the moment the weather hits 80! No spring to start with!
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