Finding A Voice
There is quiet but not silence
Follow the rhythm of breathing
Blink with rustling of eyelashes
Hear the humming of hearts beating
Creaking joints as positions shift
There is quiet but not silence
A small murmur of discomfort
Introspection on world violence
Look inward at private struggles
Lips move as prayers remain wordless
There is quiet but not silence
Kindness surrounds with forgiveness
Still our tongues to hear the message
Put aside human defiance
Listen to Love softly whisper
There is quiet but not silence
This is a French form, a Quatern, having 16 lines written in 4 quatrains with 8 syllables per line. The first line of the 1st quatrain becomes the second line of the 2nd quatrain, the third line of the 3rd quatrain, and finally the last line of the 4th quatrain. To satisfy the requirements of Wea’ve Written Weekly (W3) as Kerfe’s directions specify a poem of 16 lines or less with the first line and the last line are identical.
Blink with rustling if eyelashes…how beautiful
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Thanks Sangeetha! There are sounds if we hear. Even our thoughts interrupt silence…
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How true…And sometimes….thoughts are louder than sounds.
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Hehe! I’ve heard the gears turning!!
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I admire your magnitude Muri. And thanks for reminding me of this form. (K)
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Thanks Kerfe. I try hard (and sometimes it is hard to even try) but it is true that what we put out into the world matters. This is one of my favorite forms…
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I agree that what we put out in the world matters. But I am unable to be forgiving of those who know what the results of their actions, or non actions, will be, and just don’t care.
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I understand. I forgive them for my sake not theirs.
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You are a better person than I.
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It is all a matter of perspective and I’m not in a position to judge… ❤
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oh this is so stunning – and now I’ll have to try this form myself… I’d never even heard of this one!
Shabbat shalom!
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Thanks David – I guess a fevered mind can (between coughing fits) still find the words. I’m surprised you didn’t know this form! This one is a favorite of mine and I’ve used it load of times… You definitely should give it a try.
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I hope you feel better soon 💕
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Me too!!! Almost lunch time here and I’m still in pajamas and have no energy to move… I keep waiting for the doctor’s office to call me back.
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oy vey…
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I love that! Your line works so perfectly in each stanza
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Thanks Christine. I have been in quarantine and meditation seemed an appropriate way to sort through the emotional morass of the violence and turmoil as I try not to cough up a lung…
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Oh no! Covid? My friends just tested positive. Luckily she knew before I went to visit her.
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The Omicron seems to be very easily spread! And with the symptoms for some people being so mild they think it is allergies at first (as it is allergy season)!
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Take good care of yourself!
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I’m pampering myself a little – only did 2 loads of laundry and made myself some Bubble Tea!
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How are you feeling? I haven’t been around for the past week.
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I’m all good! There is still a residual cough but I’m all clear! Sadly 2 of my friends (who I was hoping to get together with) are now in quarantine!
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When I went up to CT I was able to see a few good friends. One though tested positive the day I was leaving to go there.
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Yikes! I hope you were still able to visit albeit at a distance and masked… I hope you’ve been able to escape this plague!
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I didn’t take the chance with my friend with COVID. I don’t want to risk others. I saw a few of the other friends I wanted to see and just let Sheri (the + Covid) know that I missed her and wished I could have seen her.
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I’m sure she understood… This new variation is very easily spread. Perhaps on your next visit.
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Yes, no harm done with good friends.
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That’s good – that your friend cares enough not to expose you!
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I like the way you played the difference between quiet and silence, and then applied it to life. Well done!
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Thanks tons Frank. I’m glad you liked it.
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Impressed, and applying the idea to my life. ♥
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Dodi ❤ There needs to be more love and much, much, less hate. There is never a point of diminishing returns on channeling love.
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Listen to Love softly whisper
There is quiet but not silence
Oh this is so beautiful Val..
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Thanks bunches Mich. I’m so pleased this touched you.
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Wonder poem. Hope you are feeling better.
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Thanks a bunch! Hope you are having a good day off and getting everything done before your big reunion!! I’m STILL waiting for the Dr. to call me back… oh well.
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The afternoon is not going well. The tiller died before making it to the garden. The brand new ac installed in January is making weird clicking noises.
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Oh no!! Your garden is so big that the tiller dying is a real disaster!! I hope the AC people will honor their work – since it really hasn’t been used until recently! Hugs!
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It has a one year warranty from the installers and five years from the manufacturer.
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*Whew* That’s good news!
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Yes. For the amount we paid for it we need a good warranty.
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Hope the service is swift!
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They could not get to us yesterday. Today is our first triple digit day. Wrangler got it to stop by pulling the breaker for a while and tapping the unit.
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Ah. Wrangler is a traditionalist. I hope the underlying issue can be corrected soon. I see lots of ice water in your future!
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They should get to it sometime this week. But Wrangler is not wanting to use it as much as I would like. Yesterday I would to have cooled down after 4 hours in the sun but the house was 85.
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Yikes. Sounds like cold shower time! I do hope they make you guys a priority…
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Tomorrow is in the low 70s and we will be gone all week and mom will come over and let them in. So as long as they fix it by Sunday we should be good.
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I’m 100% behind the message in this lovely poem. I hope Covid is moving on. I found a Life is Good T shirt I want to buy. It shows Yeti and a Unicorn and says, “Maybe all it takes is kindness.” Today at the museum with the new manager that’s what we talked about. ❤
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Thanks Martha! The fever is gone but I’m coughing so hard that I can’t sleep (of course neither can Sparky, or the neighbor dogs)… I think that shirt is perfect! More love, more kindness!! (I have been accused of “magical thinking”) But really, being kind and loving CAN effect the outcome of life in the micro and macro! I’m not afraid to at least try! Sounds like the new manager is going to be good for the museum!
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I think that shirt is perfect, too. I wish it were long-sleeved. Old lady arms… (Wow big problem!!! 😉 )
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Who cares?? If it bothers you then cut off the sleeves of a “dead” shirt and sew them into the sleeves of the new one! Problem solved! Don’t let that perfect shirt escape your grasp!
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Good idea!!!
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Quietness indeed is not necessarily silence and vice versa , Val
Love ❤
Muichel
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Thankyou Michel! Too often they are confused… just as alone and lonely are not the same.
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‘Blink with rustling if eyelashes. There is quiet by not silence’ — Wonderful lines from start to finish. Lovely and meaningful word artistry.
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Thanks for the wonderful compliment and visit!! I suppose I was inspired. Please visit again!
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Will do. 🥰
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😀
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I like that ‘quiet but not silence’.
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Thanks Bonnie! I enjoy quiet and can never find silence!
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“There is quiet but not silence..” LOVE that. This is such a beautiful poem. I love it. ..
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Thanks a bushel Elizabeth! I think most who’ve read this one are enamored of the phrase… I guess I did good!
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You did indeed.
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❤
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Muri–I’ve chosen your poem as the W3 poem this week. Thanks for your thoughtful (as always) response to my poem.–Kerfe
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Wow! Thanks so very much! I’m honored. I hope David will walk me through what I need to do…
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He’ll take care of you, don’t worry.
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🙂
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This has real depth and presence, given world events. Beautiful.
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Thanks so much! I’m tickled you are touched by these words…
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Wonderful, beautiful, meditative and heartfelt write, Val! And the last stanza is something that we all should heed. ❤️ Lovely form too, it worked so well.
I hope your cough has subsided. Take care. 🤗
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Thanks Punam. My cough is still with me but I’m feeling a little better this morning. I’m just flabbergasted that so many were moved by this one. I’m so glad you found it so good!
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Muri,
Kerfe has selected you to be this week’s PoW for W3.
This poem you wrote last week will be our prompt poem; and what we need from you now is one or two guidelines for W3 respondents.
Please send these to me as soon as possible.
Much love,
David
P.S. I hope you’re feeling at least a bit better! Did the dr call you back?
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Thanks David! I’m a little better but have no energy and my sense of taste and smell are greatly altered. If this is what its like having the vaccine and being boosted, I can’t imagine the misery of having COVID without that protection! The doctor was kind but basically I just need to treat the symptoms with OTC meds and drink lots of fluids and continue to take my vitamins. I’ll message you with my guidelines ASAP (probably after I have dinner)…
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oy, Muri… I’m thinking of you.
feel free to send me the guidelines tomorrow – no rush.
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Ha! I’ve already sent them… but it was already tomorrow there so I guess it works out in the end.
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I’ve already scheduled your W3 prompt to be posted on Wednesday at 10:00 AM (GMT+3)!
Much love to you ❤
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Love the construction of this form Val. Perfect for your message. Hope you recover soon – look after yourself.
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Thanks Marion! I’m pleased you loved this form. I’m on the way to recovery.
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That’s good to hear.
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🙂
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Oh! Let the fun begin!
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I’m so glad you are joining the W3 – I’m off to check out your poem!
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I can’t wait to see the wonders that will come of this one! The possibilities are endless!
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Hi, Muri! ❤
I just want to let you know that our next W3 prompt, hosted by Britta Benson, is now live!
Much love,
David
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I’m excited! This is so much fun!
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I have been known as “quiet, but not silent”, in a good many situations. Certainly, when in recovery, quietude is a blessed path to healing.
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Yes, there are times when being silent is what we strive for. Yet there is always a whisper of our own thoughts and the quiet sounds of our tissue paper souls…
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Such a great job and love your poem. Happy you are feeling better🙏🙏
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Thanks Cindy! I was surprised that this struck such a chord in so many…
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Oh so glad to hear. It does always surprise me as well some things I write that might not be my fav but are other peoples favs! 💖💖💖 Welcome!
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That is exactly it. I’m trying very hard not to be so critical of my work since it is obvious that I’m not the best judge of my own work!!
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Good for you.. we all are and then we have to self correct. 💖
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I tend to be my own worst critic but if the past couple weeks have shown anything its that I am a horrible judge of my own work….
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Breathe that in and register that. We all tend to do that but had to keep shifting gears 💕
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🙂
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