1 Golden
Earth dances with the sun, tilting and spinning. These two old lovers anticipate and execute intricate footwork. I am left to marvel and wonder at the choreographer. All the while, I enjoy the golden hour when nature glows.
2 Green
The geese gobble grass and paint the concrete green. A chlorophyll pigment in an abstract expression. They strut as proud artists while I question their motivation. Every day I watch the green fade as rains wash it away.
3 Orange
The fields are pregnant with produce and abundance. The orange bellies of squash and pumpkins rise. Soon there will be a birthing from field to porch. Offspring of summer sun and fall rains take an evil turn as they grin.
4 Red
The bonfire roars with heat and tongues of red. Swallowing all that is offered, ravenous for twigs and husks. My skin flushes red as I huddle close to escape the cold night. Turning away my nose is nipped red by night chill.
5 Brown
Tilting away from the sun, she dances in summer’s twilight. A striptease of leaves green and gold flung to the ground. Her body chaffed red in the wind as warmth fades to brown. I watch the world turn inward away from winter.
Edit! I was in such a rush to get this posted before I had to be at work that I completely forgot to link it to the We’ave written Weekly poetry prompt and to David’s blog at the Skeptic’s Kaddish. This week’s Poet of the Week, Sylvia Cognac, challenged us to write a Cadralor about anything related to Autumn that is important to you…
This is a Cadralor poem which is defined as a poem of 5, unrelated, numbered stanzaic images, each of which can stand alone as a poem, is fewer than 10 lines, and ideally constrains all stanzas to the same number of lines. Imagery is crucial to Cadralor – each stanza should be a whole, imagist poem, almost like a scene from a film, or a photograph. The fifth stanza pulls the unrelated stanzas together into a love poem. Which means that the fifth stanza illuminates a thread that runs obliquely through the unrelated stanzas and answers the compelling question: “For what do you yearn?” It is the poet’s discretion to decide how much contextual connection or linguistic connection will exist between the stanzas. The more unrelated in context, the sharper and riskier the poem. Ultimately, the more unrelated the stanzas, the more successful the poem will be as a Cadralor because they contain oblique connections that are illuminated by the fifth stanza. End punctuation between stanzas is also at the discretion of the poet.
Beautiful short poems. Have a great weekend
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Thanks Andy! I hope your weekend is better and you can find your joy!!
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I love they way you’ve painted autumn here. A feast for the senses. (K)
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Thanks bunches Kerfe!! I tried to make each stanza as different as possible…
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This is like a watercolor painting – I adore it!
~David
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Thanks David! I tried to tie in all the colors of the season. I’m humbled that this one is adored!!
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💜🙏🏻 Muri 🙏🏻💜
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I just reread it and love it even more
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Thanks David! It was a good challenge…
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O, yes.
Smiles with quiet joy.
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Many thanks Dodi! I’m tickled that this one brought you joy!!
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Beautiful portrait of autumn! Wow!!!
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Hehe! Britta I’m thrilled beyond reason that this one merited a “Wow”! If you must know I struggled with this form (that isn’t a form). I toyed with doing what others had done – writing it as a tanka or kimo or haiku… but in the end followed the example of using the prose poem as the basis.
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I hadn’t heard of the form at all and took a rather liberal approach. I like the idea behind it, though. Will give it another go. I think your prose poems work extremely well. But I guess, that’s because you do prose poems extremely well!!!
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Hehe! Thanks Britta! The prose poem was a form that stymied me when I was first introduced to it. The definition of a prose poem left me scratching my head. I read examples. I played around with it. I finally got comfortable – I’m thrilled you think I do them so well! You made my day!!
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Beautiful!!!
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Aw shucks! Thank-you so very much! I’m happy you liked it! I’ve been on the go and I’m attempting to go back and read everyone’s blogs to catch up!!! I will be visiting your blog soon (but first I have to run back to work for my last time-point)…
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Very inspired , Val . Where is the blue of sky and ocean ? 🙂
Love ❤
Michel
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Michel! I have not been seeing many blue skies this autumn. We have had a very wet and dreary season. And since I live far far away from any oceans they do not figure into many of my poems… ❤
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I realize, yes!
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❤ ❤
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I love these little descriptive verses!
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A shower of thanks Janet! I’m so happy that this poem was so well received!
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The colors of Autumn. I could close my eyes and see them after I read this. I also look out my window and see them. I wonder if God is giving us all this color, to make up for the drabness that usually comes before the beauty of the snow?
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Gracia I think you are right, a little burst of joyous color before the monochrome of winter… I’m tickled that this poem helped you see autumn in your mind’s eye!
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Beautiful imagery ❤ I love the alliteration in "geese gobble grass." Very lovely poem ❤
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Thanks Sylvia! I do love alliteration. I wrote my stanzas as prose poems… I’m pleased that you enjoyed this one!
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I love how you’ve painted this with color!
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Thank-you Sarah! Fall is usually a very colorful time of year. This fall has been hard to find the colors so I had to search my memories…
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Wow. You mixed all the colours to create the final brown! The poem is beautiful.
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Thanks bunches Aditi! I’m so glad you enjoyed the colors of autumn!!
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exquisitely sensual and such vivid imagery, love it!
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Thanks tons Kate!! I’m very pleased you liked it!!
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impressive Val 🙂
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Thanks Kate!! ❤
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I echo what David said…looks like a painting..
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Thank-you Mich! I tried to make each stanza a “snapshot” of autumn!
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What a colourful feast for the eyes and the soul, Val! You painted with words exquisitely. ❤️
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Thanks Punam! I’m glad you liked this one!!
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hi, Muri ❤
I just want to let you know that this week's W3, hosted by the lovely Paula Light is now live:
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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I’m headed there now!! ❤
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🤗
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I love nature poems, and yours is beautiful!
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Thanks Stephanie! The Cadralor was a form that pushed me into that place… That’s what a form can do and why I enjoy trying new ones!
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LOVE this one. Well done. Hope you are doing well.
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Thankyou Elizabeth! I’m doing great (and staying a little busier than I really want). I hope you are doing well and having fun!
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Not so much fun. I just updated. At the farm. My mama fell and is in rehab for probably a couple of months Sigh.
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I saw that after I replied to your comment. I do hope and pray that she is able to recover her strength and have at least as much mobility as she had before the fall… ❤
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The stanzas affect a haiku tone, though they are far from that genre in form.
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The Cadralor is a strange bird… But I liked the way it turned out!
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