Still we live to die
And die while living at war
We lack bandages
For broken minds, fractured souls
We turn away from carnage
Blood pools and lives pass
When life pools and blood passes
War rages, men die
Wounds ooze when the scab’s knocked off
Gathering lives is easy
The above double Tanka is my attempt at the Wea’ve Written Weekly poetry prompt at The Skeptics Kaddish and proposed by this week’s Poet of the Week, Larry Trasciatti. The prompt was to write a poem that incorporates chiasmus. That is a literary device where the grammatical structure of a previous phrase or clause is reversed or flipped. Easier said than done but I gave this my best effort.
Today is a special day that was born from blood shed on the battlefields in Europe in WWI. Supposedly it was “the war to end all wars” and nearly every country was involved in one way or another. It was marked by the use of innovations that allowed for greater killing – the airplane, chemical warfare agents, submarines and tanks. At first it was called Armistice Day because it marked the end of hostilities – a cease fire “at the 11th hour of the 11th day of the 11th month”. Then the unimaginable came to pass, WWII where death stalked this world. The war was bigger and more deadly. The armies added even more terrible weapons: the flamethrower, the submachine gun, anti-tank mines, a variety of bigger more powerful versions of grenades, mortars, bombs, airplanes that flew higher and dropped increasingly larger bombs and finally the Atomic bomb. After WWII Armistice Day was renamed Veterans’ Day to honor all who served in the military.
And here we are poised at the brink. A madman invaded Ukraine and is being repelled. But he has ratcheted up the rhetoric and the propaganda to justify his actions. Many in his country believe what the tightly controlled media is reporting. And now the nuclear option has been slammed down on the table. A “double dog dare” in effect. This is a “damned if you do and damned if you don’t” situation. All it takes is one twitch and we are back in what could be WWIII.
At 11:00 AM today I will be pausing. I will stop and pray. My prayer will be for reason to overrule insanity, for peace to quell war, and for healing to come to this broken world.
As the lyrics go… “when will they ever learn?”
Those are beautiful things to pray for. 🕊
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Thank-you for the compliment. Some folks don’t think prayer has any power but the power of prayer, I believe, can move mountains! I’m praying for peace and working for justice!
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Beautiful take on the prompt. It’s sad that wars are still being fought leading to much carnage and loss of lives that could have been avoided.
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Thanks tons Shweta. It is a sad and broken world that we live in…
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You’re most welcome. Yes, unfortunately that’s the truth about the world.
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It is sadly…
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Yes, we will remember them.
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We will. But who will remember them when we are gone??
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We share the stories, we buy the books for our children and for our grandchildren, we take photos of all the country monuments to be added the database, we volunteer to research the unnamed soldiers not given a proper burial – only an unmarked grave, and we trace those relatives who ‘se soldier kin never received their medals. We support exservice charities with time or money and more importantly, as Halloween is NOT and an Australian custom but seems to be growing thanks to American influences, we ban plastic rubbish from China on environmental grounds and commemorate The Charge Of Beersheba instead. See if The Lighthorseman DVD is in your library, Muri.
End of rant 🙂
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Hehe! It was sort of a rhetorical question but also glad it struck a match to your passion! Sparky is checking on the availability of the DVD as I type!!
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This is absolutely beautiful, Val. ❤️🤍💙
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A bushel of thanks for the compliment! I’m delighted that you found it so beautiful!!!
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You’re welcome my friend! 💛
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
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I watched the ceremony at the Arc de Triomphe in Paris . In the pas to l went with my children to th e ceremony of Novembre 11, in Arras , my previous town . Arras is tha capitale of Artois whre many soldiers French and english have been killed in WW1
Love ❤
Michel
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I think that in Europe there are many more heartfelt ceremonies seeing as the battles were fought on that very spot!! I understood what you typed so not to worry! I suspect I have quite a few
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Sorry I am probably tired , I multiply the typing mistakes
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I’m tired too… Not to worry about the typos.
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Lovely poem and I echo your thoughts to ❤
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Thanks so much! I knew I was not alone in these hopes and prayers (and I’m surrounded by quite the number who are dreaming Peace into existence)…
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🙏
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🙂
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Bloody war! 😥
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You’d think we’d figure it out that it is counter-productive for sustaining the species!!
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Knowing that it IS a broken world, I trust that somehow God’s plan for healing will overcome the hard hearts that seek violent means for conflict resolution. That will never stop me from praying for more expressions of mercy and a better willingness to avoid war. I’m with you on that, because that’s the role I find is best for me, too.
Great poem!
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Thanks bunches Dodi!! The more prayers the better!!!!
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THANKS SO MUCH FOR YOUR POST. This is a day of sadness for me. Veterans Day is not a day of celebration but rather one to Mourn with memory of those who have fought and died to keep our freedoms as was meant to be. I only wish more just stopped and remembered this in a time when so many do not stop to think that we could loose those freedoms from within. Thanks, well said, and well done. Now I need to work on a Tanka too.
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Dear SAM, it is a time to remember and to attempt to convince people that war is evil and that we can and should! I’m very happy that you found this one to be inspiring – please do share your Tanka when you have it completed…
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First try to share with FB failed when I hit their icon above. LOL Now linked friends will read. My veteran is sitting in the rocker waiting for me to get his lunch. 🙂
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Thanks for the share Bonnie! Give Wil a hug and a thank you for his service!
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We are badly in need of that healing…(K)
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Indeed! What the world needs now is love sweet love… I feel a song coming on!
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You are right , Val, to underline the horror of the wars in Europe .
You are right to tell this in a poem., as we cannot imagine the horrible sore of the wounded people or agonishing people
I am faith in Jesus . Is not absurd to be born to die ?? Pscal said the human is the reed the most fragil in the nature BUT IT IS A THINKING REED!
Love ❤
Michel
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Thanks Michel! I’m glad that you and I have faith – and even faith as small as a mustard seed is big enough! We have free will but I’m afraid that most people have turned off their brains. Seems too many have forgotten that God loves us… ❤
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I think so. ❤
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❤ ❤ ❤ !
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Good job on the prompt. 👍
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Many thanks Brandon!! I’m pleased you liked it!
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I’ll be praying too Val…
And this is a beautiful tanka and your use of the chiasmus is brilliant
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Thank-you Mich! That is high praise!! ❤ So pleased you thought it brilliant!
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Wow, Muri, this poem & post are truly excellent – thank you. I really enjoyed this.
~David
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I just read it again. I love even more the second time.
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David I’m flabbergasted! Thanks for giving it a second read – I know when a poem grabs my attention I often read it multiple times…
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Thanks tons David!! I’m thrilled you liked it – even if it is as dark subject (I suppose I can do serious stuff if I try)…
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Good one, a lot like ‘Where Have All the Flowers Gone?’ and other wartime songs and poems.
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Thanks Larry! There are so many touching and heartfelt songs that were inspired during times of great distress and societal upheaval – war being one of the biggest instigators…
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That’s a touching poem, and I love the way you recognize Veteran’s Day. A very apt prayer indeed.
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Thanks Ann! It is always on my mind – this prayer….
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Powerful poem 🌹 and impressive 💕
We will remember them 💐
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Thanks Lesley! I’m gratified that you thought this one powerful!
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❤️🌹
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I thought you nailed that tricky format, sharing my quandary about war. Your historical summary says it all … what next, greed will be the death of us all in one way or another 😦
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Thanks Kate. The use of the chiasmus was indeed a tricky bit. War is evil and no real winner no matter which side claims victory. Yes greed is rampant and it stalks as surely as death!
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greed to gain more land and minions, greed to get better and more … all those harmful emotions surely lead to misery in every possible way Val …
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I completely agree. Generosity of spirit, with time, with resources, and wealth and love and compassion – all things to offset the greed…
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well said, let’s balance it out with kind care, sharing and much love 🙂
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Yes! ❤
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Let the fun begin!!
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Awesome sauce!! I really enjoyed you Blitz!
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Marty Goetz, my favorite musician and a Jewish believer in Jesus, said just before our elections here in the U.S., “We don’t know what the future holds, but we know Who holds the future.” A word of hope for us all. I join you in prayer!
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Very true – even for those who don’t believe!
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I just stopped over to read your latest masterpiece! ❤
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Wonderful!! Just so good to read!
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It’s sad that humanity will probably never change. 100+ years on and we’re still fighting with each other.
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Yep. It started as far back as creation! I think there will always be fighting – on the individual level as well as the national/international levels!
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Val, I am extremely sorry for being so late.
Such a beautiful write. ❤️ Congratulations and though I love writing blitz poems, I am sorry I couldn’t respond to your prompt due to paucity of time.
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Punam – no need to apologize! We all have busy lives and sometimes life takes precedence over writing poems. I’m attempting the latest prompt but I’ve been on the run all day today with work AND cooking the Thanksgiving feast. Tomorrow I’m attending Sparky’s family get together for Thanksgiving and yes I have to make another dessert and bake a cake! So that’s on the agenda for tonight. I’m stealing a few minutes to respond to some comments before getting the cake in the oven (at which time I’ll steal away to WP to read and write once more!)
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So we do, Val, so we do! But when I can’t read my favourite poets on WP or respond to their challenges, I feel guilty.
Wow! You have a lot on your plate. I hope you had a lovely feast and the dessert and the cake came out really well.
Happy Thanksgiving, dear friend! ❤️
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Some of us demand closure – once a challenge is begun we have to see it through!! Recently I’ve been responding to comments when I can’t sleep but that has to end or I’ll be a zombie by Christmas! The desserts were good but the highlights were the people gathered around the table. Though I have to say that the turkey came out delicious (amazing what a bottle of White Zinfandel will do when poured into the body cavity and baked breast down)!
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That is true!
At any gathering, it is the people who make it memorable and if the food is good, it is the icing on the cake, so to say.
Zinfandel is very versatile! 😄
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Hehe! I only use the wine in the turkey – it really does make the meat tender and the gravy is so very tasty!!! Of course the family extended is the best part!
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At 11 a.m., on 11/11, the moderator at a meeting I was in was still talking, so I silently said a prayer for peace.
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Seems too many don’t take that moment to pause anymore. I can remember in elementary school we all stopped for a minute. Though no one announced a prayer, silence was required. By the time I was in middle school no one was saying the Pledge of Allegiance and no more minute of silence on 11-11 either…
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