You Weren’t Born To Serve Another’s Agenda
You demand ice cream pounding
On the table as if driving roofing nails
You complain of too tight trousers
I become your tailor, thimble on thumb
Your anger spills over seeing a dog hair
Randomly shed by your mangy mutt
Keep this place clean you shout
Declutter the kitchen, fold the laundry
Make my coffee, do it all now
These and other conversations play on a loop
And I cannot mourn sitting next to your coffin
The first scavenger hunt I ever participated in was on Xanga way back in the day. It was devised by a Xangan called MoonCatBlue. Well, she has issued another Scavenger Hunt – “MoonCatBlue’s House of Mayhem’s Revival Scavenger Hunt of the Mind”. I was invited to join this private little group so you will all be subjected to the Mayhem that may occur. The above Free Verse is based on prompt #1 – Check your daily horoscope. Select one sentence and use it as a title. I also included prompt #2 – Incorporate: thimble, coffin, tailor, ice cream, dog hair, roofing nails.
Where does one go with all those emotions…the love in the ordinary everyday messiness that gives life meaning….
Beautiful write
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Thanks Sangeetha. The idea that love is always easy is a myth that too many have bought into. Then when things and people are difficult they head for divorce court!!
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And yet…who we are in those difficu
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difficult moments is what makes us write about the love, the pain and everything in between
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True. Though I do not subscribe to the “suffering artist” school instead a highly developed sense of empathy and keen observation gives credibility to the poetry…
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I like that. Curiousity, introspection and staying real
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Thanks Sangeetha!
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wow, Muri! This is great ❤
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Thanks David. I guess I’m on a roll!
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💛
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A manifesto we can all be in agreement with. And I love that prompt! (K)
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Yes life is unpredictable and a bit tiresome at times. Then things happen and we have to come to grips with how we will face adversity.
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speaks of domestic violence to me.
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It is open to interpretation… Some background is not stated. Just to keep things vague!
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This is how I perceived it too. Very haunting.
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Sometimes illness can cause short tempers and a change in personality… Not necessarily an abusive relationship but definitely a strained one.
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I really like this!
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Thanks! I’m tickled you found it interesting!!
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An interesting poem. Happy Thanksgiving.
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It was written to explore the inner workings of the poet’s mind… I’ve got an apple cranberry pie in the oven and 2 pumpkin pies cooling! It is going to be a busy night – have to bake a cake and then mix up all the sides ahead of time!! Hope your Thanksgiving is Happy and filled with family!
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I have been doing some cleaning. When Wrangler gets home and I know what I need to do I will prep for the turkey. You are in my thoughts and prayers as the anniversary of your mom’s passing comes. Wrangler is struggling due to Grandpa’s on Saturday. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving.
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This holiday is rough for me and I’m sure Wrangler is feeling it too… I think Thanksgiving will always be a little sadder. Hope you can make it a little brighter for Wrangler!
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Thank you. I just know it is a tough one.
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❤
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Brilliantly executed 🙂
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Thanks bunches! It was a little tricky!
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I love this. Your mind is so complicated and brilliant and it shows in your writings. Thanks for letting us all have a peek. Happy Turkey Day!! Love ya, Joe
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Hey Joe! Happy Thanksgiving! So when are you going to take up blogging again? I’d love to read some of YOUR wit and wisdom… ❤
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Looks antithèse of Thanksgiving, Val 🙂 I wonder how your talented poem would become if we replace the you or your by I . ?
Happy Thanksgiving for all.
Love ❤
Michel
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That would definitely change the tenor of the poem! Perhaps for the better? I hope your week is going well and the weather isn’t too cold! ❤
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Loved this.
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Thanks tons Di!
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You’re welcome
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🙂
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I like that you were clever with tough prompts. I’m sad that this describes too many real life situations.
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Dodi – it is sad when spouses don’t treat each other with kindness and respect. And then tragedy happens and there is no chance for a “do over” or reconciliation….
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Wow! You don’t make it easy whenyou combine two prompts, do you?! This worked really well!
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Thanks Janet! Sometimes I need to challenge myself and sometimes I’m inspired and every once in awhile they coincide resulting in a poem that I can feel good about!
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This is so powerful, I think it’s one of my favourites yet.
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I’m overjoyed that you like it enough to put it in the favorite category!! Thanks bunches!
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I like the poem and look forward to more from this scavenger hunt. You do a great job combining prompts. 🙂
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Thanks Stephanie! The scavenger hunt is quite the challenge (because MoonCatBlue never goes easy on her scavenger hunts). Sometimes a serious challenge can get the creative forces to jump into high gear!!! There are 35 of them to be completed by Dec 31st but I’m sure that I won’t be able to get them all done (even with combining multiple prompts)…
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Your imagination is limitless! Either that or Sparky has a darker side you haven’t told us about.
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Hehe! No Sparky is a sweetheart. I am however a keen observer of people and I will eavesdrop on any and all conversations that happen in public. That combined with imagination and you get this poem…
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I have dealt with those who regarded it as their mission to mind my business. The door was shown to the last such person, nearly three years ago.
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Yes. We shouldn’t be the slave to the opinions and desires of others!
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Love is easy, but marriage is work. That level of disrespect and taking someone for granted deserves a “no comment” at the funeral!
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Absolutely. When you are supposed to mourn but only feel relief and release it is hard…
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Yeah, I guess there’s a lot of regret in that situation.
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Regret and guilt.
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:_(
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