Here’s another massive effort to complete MoonCatBlue’s House of Mayhem scavenger hunt before time runs out. I combined prompts #9 – Telescope as object and metaphor, #13 – Microscope as object and metaphor, #22 – Incorporate: human skeleton, lemon pudding, snow, Prometheus, Christmas music, #23 – Write an aubade incorporating: raccoon, tornado, tennis ball, #24 – Something set in an orchard.
Watch the morning sky
Turn lemon pudding yellow
My tears fall like snow
Winter orchard tryst must end
When Prometheus brings fire
Christmas music plays
As your alarm and I weep
Tennis ball lump in my throat
Naked human skeleton
I am stripped bare by your love
Tornado desire
Stolen forbidden apples
Ravenously eaten
The raccoon must wash his food
Not as sweet with marriage banns
I return to work
Microscope focus on cells
Examine my life
Search for signs of disease
Is our love true or just lust
His telescope calls
He scans our vast universe
Hoping to find life
Unaware he has found me
Hyperopic I’m ignored
These prompts are really kicking my butt. I’ve done some of the more difficult ones interspersed with the easiest. I’ve got 18 of 35 prompts left to complete so I’m half way done. Wish me luck.
These prompts are way more complicated than the simple word prompts I respond to, Muri!
❤
David
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I suppose in some ways they are more difficult but in other ways they are easier since once you get a feel for the prompt you can step outside yourself and be more creative!
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I like the way this veers off in a different direction with each stanza. But I agree with David. My mind could not manage these at all. (K)
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Hehe! It isn’t called the House of Mayhem of the Mind Scavenger Hunt for nothing!! It is supposed to get you to write on a more visceral level…
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I need my mayhem in small doses these days…
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It was my choice to mash all the prompts together. There are 35 of them so they were supposed to be spread out over 60 days… I’m just an overachiever!
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Indeed you are.
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🙂
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Good luck!! My brain said no! 😁😂😂😂💜
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Hehe! I’m trying to get these done before the New Year – we’ll see if I’m successful!! I do like a challenge… This mouse is fearless I tell you! Fearless!!
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😁 you go get ‘em!! 😁
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Hehe! I’m on it!!
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This , indeed, looks complexe, Val! 🙂
Love ❤
Michel
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Thanks Michel ❤ It looks difficult but it was very fun to do – I like to exercise the brain a bit to stay nimble!!
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Wow…Good luck.
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Thanks Martha! It is really making my brain sweat – and my imagination is going to need a spa day when this is over!!
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You are really at your best when writing in poetic forms Val..these prompts are so complicated…i am not sure i could do it myself
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Thank-you Mich! I think you are creative and you’d find a way to make these prompts into an awesome poem about love!!!
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Personally, I think you’re doing a great job with the prompts!
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Thanks Ann! Its nice to have the positive feedback.
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This is a fascinating poem. All the best for others!
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Thanks Kritika! Some of these writing prompts really make me “dig deep”!
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My pleasure always. It must be exciting to dig deep.
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Sometimes exciting but often painful and exhausting. We all have fears and memories that we’d rather forget and take out to a remote field and bury!
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Agree with you. Digging sometimes is exhausting.
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But you can unearth buried treasure!!
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Oh yes!
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😀
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Amazing, how even a microscope cannot “find” someone standing right in front and earnestly seeking attention. On the other hand, how many times is someone who wants to be left alone made the focus of unwanted attention?
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So very true on both counts… And we often have no control especially when we are the ones being examined!
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