I looked at the W3 poetry prompt from this week’s Poet of the Week Paula Light and was at a loss. So I decided to put my new file box into use to hold my extensive 3×5 card collection of poetic forms. During the switch from a too small plastic card holder to the beautiful wooden file box that will hold 600 cards easily, I found a form that I haven’t used in awhile. The Anagrammatic Poem. It is a poem written using only words made from the letters contained in the chosen word or phrase. The chosen word(s) is the title. There are no other requirements – for rhyme, meter, or syllable count. I give you my anagrammatic poem:
The Breakup
Her breath kept her here
He beat, repeat, rape, repeat
Her burka trap hurt, puke, heat
Pure earth eater erupt
Puree hate eat
Take rebuke
Brute repute
Tear, break
True heart
But he put
Her hate
There
Power in words… An amazing read…touching… 🤍
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Thanks Destiny! This form helped channel the words and the emotions…
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I see that… Sad yet magnificently expressed…
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Thanks tons dear!
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Beautiful poem.
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I’m glad you liked this one! It is an ugly topic wrapped in beautiful words…
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Yes.
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❤ ❤
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Intense!
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Thanks Paula! It is an intense topic – the breaking of a heart, a soul, and a mind…
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Really digging the form too. Very clever!
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Thanks tons! It is a form that I’ve used before but not lately. I do like the way it forces you into a concise channeling of words and emotions. Very appropriate for the topic…
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friggin’ amazing, I would say! ❤
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❤
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Impressed, and touched.
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Many thanks Dodi! It seems a far too common of a story…
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It’s getting more daylight than it did when our mothers peers were grappling with it. It was common enough for our grandmothers that no one had much problem with a man hitting his wife in their day. Just watch some of the early movies and how easily it was shown as something men did and women had to “understand” (some movies with John Wayne, even showed that). So – it’s getting better.
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I was always taught that there was no excuse for a man to hit a woman. Indeed times are changing and domestic violence is becoming less and less prevalent (at least here it is a crime) than in other parts of the world…
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So very powerful ❤
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Thanks bunches AJ! I was trying to be concise and the form forced my hand…
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Another new form for me, sounds very interesting. I love very limiting forms and you have given me a masterclass here.
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Thanks Britta! It is a fun form and can be really fun if you choose the right words… I’d love to see what you can do with it!
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Ouch.
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Ouch indeed. Too many women are in marriages with no escape…
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Oh that went right over my head, please explain that form again, this time with simple words, I am an old fart you know~!
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SAM I’d bet you’ve played the game before: there is a word and you must find all the words you can make using the letters found in the word… Then you take those words and ONLY those words and write a poem. It is that simple.
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Actually no, I am not a “wordle”. I never was very good at it, really looked dumb at word games, and Judy asked me about that.. I will always end up using words of another language, that will not make no sense, and even the good ones will be miss spelled.. So honestly, this kind of thing is just not for me~! But now if you would like to talk about math, world history, or even physics, I may be able to hold my own.. Now let’s go back to those simple ones ones, you know, the ones that only use phonically rhyme~! Ha~!
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SAM there is nothing wrong with rhymes! I love an inventive rhyme or a thought provoking rhyming poem… Better still a poem that reveals an opinion!
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Wow. You packed a lot of power into a tiny poem with just a handful of letters. Great job ❤
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Many thanks Sylvia! It is a fun form to work with…
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It’s, really, sad to see, how, in this day and age, there are, those cultures, that still, oppress, women, because men wanted to, control us.
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Power is a drug. If it takes violence against someone you are supposed to love for a man to feel powerful then there is something broken in him and in society… This poem is about all the breaking and brokenness.
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Funny, there’s really a lot of latitude or possibility with that form, if I am understanding it correctly, but in your poem it gained in velocity like a whirlpool, going from intense to more intense.
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I’m extremely pleased that you felt the intensity! It is a topic that no one really wants to talk about. As for the form – it can have lots of latitude but it all depends on the word(s) chosen… I really wished at some point I’d selected a word containing the letter D. In the end it worked out to my advantage despite no D!!
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Muri ~ I’ve sent you an email about being this week’s W3 PoW ~ if you have not received it, please let me know ❤
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Oh wow …you make it look so easy writing complicated poetry forms Val…bravo..and i love this one..
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Hehe! Thanks Mich. It isn’t so hard if you love to play with words! I bet you could do great things with this form!
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Hi, Muri 🙂
Your W3 is now live!
Enjoy ❤
~David
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Woot! I was there earlier and read JYP’s offering. I’m headed back after I work on my ceramic show spreadsheet (I hate pricing my work but it must be done).
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Wow! This is a fascinating poetry form—creating a powerful poem! ❤️
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Thanks bushels Lesley! I’m flattered that you found it both powerful and fascinating!
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💕
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😀
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This is brilliant! Kudos👏👏👏👏
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Many thanks Sangeetha! I’m pleased you think it brilliant! ❤
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🤍
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😀
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I just went to check it out – lovely and a different take on the topic!! ❤
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I just visited. You really took the form and made it sing!!
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A logical result, for sure!
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Thanks Gary – but some are trapped and can’t seem to break away!
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Perfection!
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Powerful.
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Thanks Elizabeth! It was not an easy topic…
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No, but one which needs addressing more.
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Indeed. Only when a light is shined into the darkest corners can evil be exposed and hopefully once exposed it can be eliminated!!
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