This is my response to the W3 poetry prompt hosted by David at The Skeptic’s Kaddish. The Poet of the Week, Sarah David asked that we write a poem of 14 lines or fewer in any form on the theme of “dreams”. Dreams are elusive, slipping through my fingers on most mornings. I do have a couple recurring dreams, one really fun one and several that I classify as stress dreams. But the majority of my dreams leave me with a faint taste on the tip of my tongue or a lingering feeling of someone holding my hand or brushing my hair…
Seal slip into the dream ocean
I swim through memories undone
Surrounded by liquid emotion
Pulled, twisted, plunged deep and spun
Shadow ghost of the give and take
Revise the day, the night remake
Silver moonbeams a rare silk line
Strands of regret and gray hair
I weave my history symbol and sign
Connect my heart from here to there
What was, could or should be
The dream is my soul’s fervent plea
Jolted awake the dream dissipates
I rise to pass through reality’s gates
Excellent poetry
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Thanks Sadje! I’m tickled you liked it!
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You’re most welcome
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Val, this is absolutely beautiful. You’re very gifted with words. What a perfect poem to describe dreams. I’m sending love and hugs always. 💕🙏🏻
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Karla! I’m thrilled that you are here and that you enjoyed this one. I just got your newsletter. The toddler quotes were adorable overload!! You are in my thoughts and prayers always. The prayer warriors met last week and I didn’t have an update – but I’ve got one now – thanks!! I love you! Hugs to you and Finn ❤ ❤ ❤
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Aww 🥰 I’m so glad you enjoyed the newsletter! We can learn so much from toddlers! I’m so glad you’ll be able to give them an update. Specifically, my bones are not cooperating. I know it’s a struggle worse in cold weather. My Dad was diagnosed with lung cancer two weeks ago. Can you please add him too? My poor Mom. We are a family filled with faith. And it’s sure being tested! We win no matter what! I love you and appreciate you. Finn does too! 🐾🐾🥰💕🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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Oh Karla, I will contact the prayer warriors and add your dad (and mom) to the list!! I love you and wish I could give you a hug – a virtual hug will have to do! So consider yourself hugged! Mochi hopes Finn is keeping everyone’s spirits up and providing the cuddles that are so important!!
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Thank you so much, Val! I feel bad I didn’t send Mochi hugs and kisses~here they are~😘😘🤗🤗 and belly rubs! Finn sends love and cuddles! Thank you for adding my parents. 🙏🏻💕🥰
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Mochi is curled up under the computer desk at my feet – she is having an exciting dream (lots of twitching and little baby barks) so I won’t wake her to apply the sent hugs, kisses and belly rubs! You are very welcome – I just wish I was able to do more…
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Thank you so much. That touches my heart. 💚🥲🙏🏻
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❤ Hugs ❤
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💕🤗❤️
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Dreams really are like a moonlit ocean. You described them so well. ‘The dream is my soul’s fervent plea’. Excellent line.
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Thanks bunches Tanmay! I’m so happy you liked that line as it was one I struggled with…
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I find most dreams are like that–a lingering feeling. Dissipates–exactly the right word. (K)
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The older I get the less vivid my dreams on most nights – more like swimming through color and emotion. Then every once in awhile I get a truly astounding dream!!
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Me too. Our minds can only hold on to so much, and they are pretty full at this point.
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Yes that’s the truth!
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I didn’t recall dreaming much until I got a CPAP machine and used it. I guess not strangling as you sleep helps to maintain a dream state (rueful chuckle). I like how you describe your dreams, and found a way to poetically do it, too.
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Thanks Dodi! I think that you are correct – dreaming is easier and of higher quality when you can breath!!!
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Loving the gorgeous imagery in this poem!
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Thanks much for the compliment and the visit to my blog!!
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There are pretty lines that are worth gold, Val
Love ❤
Michel
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Thanks Michel! I think there is gold in dreams where we can reexperience those good memories. ❤
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I love the image of the seal slipping off into the dream ocean
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Thanks Janet! I love that image too. I don’t usually have any problem falling asleep so it really is as easy for me as a seal slipping into the water…
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Many of my dreams leave me with pieces of sensory details and swirling emotions. You’ve captured that feeling well and pulled it all together neatly. Beautiful poem!
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Thanks tons Sarah! It is that lingering emotion that seems to happen most often. I’m fortunate that most of the time they are positive emotions!
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Excellent work that captures dreams so well. The first stanza captured so much in so few words. Well done!
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Many thanks Frank! I’m tickled you liked it!
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Oh my goodness. This is wonderful. Beautiful. What a dream of a poem 🌹
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Thank-you Lesley! I’m thrilled you thought it so good!!!
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I love to recount my dreams with my grandchildren. So many dreams, some written and some in the periphery of my memories. Love your writing Val.
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I bet they love to hear your dreams as well! I’m pleased you liked this one!
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This is a gorgeous poem! I absolutely loved the imagery and the way you take us along on your vivid dreams. Lovely writing ❤️💫
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Thanks Deepthy! I’m thrilled you liked it!!
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Beautifully spun words Val. A little bit of a sonnet with a twirl of a villanelle to my reading ears. I love the flow of emotion from line to line. Dreams are elusive little darlings and your poem has that dreamlike quality.
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Thanks tons Gina! The prompt gets some credit as it brought these ideas from a dream to a reality! I’m so happy to see you back on WP!!
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Gorgeously composed, Muri ❤ (as always, pretty much!)
~David
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Thanks David! I’m pleased that you think this one gorgeous!
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hi, Muri ❤
The lovely Denise is hosting W3 this week ~ and she's come up with a unique prompt!
Enjoy 🙂
David
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Very unique!!
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right⁉️
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Hehe! Absolutely!
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ooh love the imagery Muri! 👏
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Many thanks Cindy! It seems to have struck a chord for many!
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You’re most welcome! the midas touch~
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Hehe! Thanks!
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ha!❣️
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True, so many dreams communicate the soul’s hidden wants.
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😃
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