This is the very last of the House of Mayhem of the Mind Scavenger Hunt developed and hosted by MoonCatBlue. I am wrapping this up with a story poem (free verse sandwiched in a monorhyme) that includes the situation on Prompt #6 – due to a misunderstanding someone has booked a stay at an AirBnB/owl sanctuary despite a mild fear of birds and #8 – retell/reimagine a children’s story shifted for adults. I chose the Grimm Fairy Tale The Owl for this prompt. It is essentially a story about letting the imagination override reason resulting in destruction of property and death of an ordinary owl which is imagined to be a supernatural monster.
In the darkness I alight
Pay the Uber head toward light
Air BnB for the night
Rustling wings give me a fright
Fear of owls swooping in flight
This mistake can’t be put right
The urge to leave I must fight
Sleep and dream and just sit tight
All is better in daylight
A tangled dream of monstrous eyes
Clawing talons squeezing breath
From punctured lungs and crushing weight
I confront the owl confused
Who is more afeard when imagination
Captures reason and tears logic down?
Would I burn up all I own
When dread runs a rushing wind
And causes insanity in men?
Sweat drenched awake at midnight
The Lord’s Prayer aloud recite
Fear and terror will incite
A great panic to ignite
Patient wait for dawn’s first sight
See that everything’s alright
Convince self of trip’s delight
Know owls don’t hold hateful spite
For dream owls with flames I smite
despite my fondness of the owl song nearby … I have not forgotten how scared I was age 10 of the swooping sound of even my canary; thanks for your poem, Muri.
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Thanks Barbara! Glad this one was interesting.
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So many realities to absorb and confront! I found this one really interesting :).
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Thanks Dodi! Interesting is good and that there was a lot going on to ponder is even better!
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An interesting poem with many twist and turns
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I’m glad this one wasn’t boring!!
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Whoa… I was saying, “Owls don’t do that!” but a nightmare owl can do anything.
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Yeah. And they don’t make any noise at all when flying – not a single rustling breath. But fear makes the imagination run wild and people see and hear and feel what is not and ignore what is…
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Yep. I had a barn own flying beside me one time in real life. It wasn’t scary at all, just beautiful, a once in a life time bit of magic.
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That’s quite a journey! (K)
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Thanks Kerfe! And a very happy (belated) birthday!!
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Thanks. I might prefer to ignore them, but I can’t complain about making it through another year.
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I’m in the “its just another day” camp. Still I am grateful for all the days behind me and the anticipation of more ahead!
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That’s a good way to look at it. And my girls always like an excuse to bake.
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Baking can be therapeutic!
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A poem full of terror triggers for the few or many. Cleverly woven piece Val and as always i enjoyed the concluding verse where fear is overcome. Excellent writing.
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Thanks Gina!! Reason triumphs – a happy ending…
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That’s a nice poem. Ignorance, hatred and fear all defy logic and reasoning. Lots of wisdom in this poem – well done!
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Loads of thanks Matt! That is high praise!! I’m so pleased you liked this one!
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great poem Val, fear of most things are irrational … better a healthy wariness 🙂
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Very true Kate! It takes time and many fears can be overcome with maturity and knowledge…
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so true Val, good luck with yours 🙂
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Very exciting poem that makes us hold our breath, Val
Love ❤
Michel
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Michel I’m thrilled this poem was suspenseful for you!! Thanks ❤
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A very interesting poem Val with brilliant twist🌹
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A ton of thanks Mich! It was the hardest prompts that I left for last and I’m very happy with the resulting poem.
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Owls are seen by the Nations people of the Southwest as harbingers of death.
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Death does come in silence like an owl in flight
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