Here is my offering for the W3 poetry prompt set by Denise DeVries. I really had trouble coming to grips with this prompt. On the one hand my muse looks at it and shudders in revulsion on the other my mind argues that it is nothing more than a tool. My internal argument went something like this:
Muse: Using artificial intelligence to assist in writing a poem is cheating.
Mind: AI is just a tool.
Muse: A tool for lazy people and the unimaginative.
Mind: More like a prompt to kick start the creative process.
Muse: I am the creative process!!
Mind: You are unreliable. The AI doesn’t take sabbaticals for months on end.
Muse: I’m NOT unreliable!
Mind: You are egotistical and a fragile flower. You need to get over yourself!
Muse: If you do this thing with AI, I’m out of here – forever!
Mind: Can we compromise? Maybe just have the AI come up with a couple random words to incorporate into a poem?
Muse: Hmmm. I suppose that would be alright. Just this once.
https://randomwordgenerator.com/ gave me the following 3 words:
miserable, premature, idea
I struggled. I sweated. And I nearly rolled on the ground like a horse with colic. After I had a little chocolate and calmed down, I thought about what I wanted to say. Then I considered which form would be the most expeditious to convey those ideas. I settled on the Tanka. It offers a little more freedom than the Haiku but still requires a conciseness.
I’m miserable
Poetic ideas gone
Premature panic
My muse ran away from home
Muscle memory writing
Great post! 🐸
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Thanks!
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You are HILARIOUS 😂
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Hehe! My mother thought I should do stand up comedy. But I was just letting my angsty teen self out for a romp..
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😅
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🙂
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BTW, this week’s W3, hosted by the brilliant Brandon Ellrich, is now live 🙂
Enjoy ❤
~David
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This one will take some serious thought!!
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The end result is good.
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Thanks! You are too kind!!
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You’re welcome 😍
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❤
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This is wonderful. 🙂
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Thank you Kitty! I’m happy you think it worthy!
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This is brilliant! Funny and all too relatable!
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That scares me that this is relatable! I wouldn’t wish this agony on anyone!! hehe 😀
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Could apply to so many circumstances in life. (K)
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Yep! 🙂
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I loved the dialogue with the muse. It was quite familiar. I’m happy you reached a compromise that will satisfy you both!
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Thanks tons Denise! A compromise was reached and still my muse is pouting….
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Muri, that inner conversation was so funny! 🤣🤣😆😆 Worth the struggle just to read that interaction between your mind & muse! 👏👏👌👌😂😂
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Many thanks Ken! I’m tickled that this tickled you!!
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😂 you’re funny
Good write
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Thanks Sangeetha! I suppose I can be funny when I get on a roll!!
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😊
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The struggle between AI and the mind, very well thought out. Been there done that when my muse takes off. such a challenge!
Love the construction of those words in your poem.
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Thank-you Zakiah! It can be quite the moment of agony when the muse evaporates! I’m grateful you liked this one!! ❤
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HAHAHA! what an entertaining read Val. Your muse is firm and authoritative!
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Thanks Gina! You are kind – I usually characterize her as bossy! hehehe!
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Loved the dialogue with your muse. “Muscle memory writing”… thank goodness you are toned; even that would be gone if we relied too much on the computer for generating words, phrases, etc.
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Thanks Dede! I’m glad you enjoyed this little conversation with myself! My great grandmother (and grandmother, mother and now me and my sons) always said, “supple your muscles” meaning either do some work either physically or mentally! It is surprising how often we rely on muscle memory…
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Was this a response to all the news about ChatGBT lately?
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I was responding to a prompt (which may have been based on that) and then everyone started posting and news articles were everywhere. I have to say it did cause me some serious mental turmoil and angst…
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that artificial stuff is into art too I understand. half the human faces you see you don’t know if they are real.
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Hehe! Yes, the computer generated images (CGI) can look very real. What gets me is the “auto-tuned” voices of singers. They really don’t sound at all lie that when they sing in person without the computer…
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I like “Muscle memory writing.” 🙂
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Thanks Stephanie! My son’s violin teacher wanted him to practice a song 100 times. He’d complain but her response was “You aren’t practicing until you get it right, you are practicing so your muscles won’t forget!” I think of writing as suppling my brain muscles – thus muscle memory!!
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As I read through these posts, I remember that I have a post yet to write this evening. Something will come to me-sans AI.
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AI is everywhere. I was discussing tattoos with my sister and not 5 minutes later my phone was giving me suggestions about tattoos and tattoo removal!
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