The Poet of the Week, Brandon Eldrich, set the Wea’ve Written Weekly poetry prompt on The Skeptic’s Kaddish blog. This week the prompt is a real challenge as we are asked to compose a riddle or “puzzle” poem. I had to really mull this prompt over. I had to think hard and even enlisted the aid of my sons. They made lots of suggestions from a banana to the Deep Water Horizon oil spill. I decided to go with this one:
I’m square or oval but mostly round
All around I can be found
From kitchen blender
To computer sender
Outside the front door
And when vacuuming the floor
Siblings find them just for fun
You’re exposed when I’m undone
Too much to eat and I will pop
Match me up bottom to top
Made of metal, plastic, bone and glass
Guess me quick, don’t be the last!
Make your guess in the comments and I’ll confirm or deny!
Button/switch?
LikeLike
A button is the correct answer!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
A good one🤍
LikeLike
Thanks much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Pretty easy, Val — I had guessed buttons by about the 3rd or 4th line!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oops — and now I’ve given it away for everybody else — sorry!
LikeLike
Hehe! Yes but it saved me the trouble of having to let each commenter know if they were correct – now it is like a self grading test!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’m happy to see that I didn’t spoil it for everybody! I grew up singing “Button, button, who’s got the button?” so this one was pretty easy for me ! I’ll try to conceal my response a little better the next time you do one of these!
LikeLike
Not to worry – I’ll probably never do another! It was for a prompt and so not one of my “go to” forms…
LikeLike
I didn’t want it to be so hard that no one could get it!!
LikeLike
Button
LikeLike
You are correct! I was hoping that it wasn’t too difficult and the first 2 comments guessed it! Yay!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
A good riddle.
LikeLike
Thank-you so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re most welcome Val.
LikeLike
❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙏🏼
LikeLike
Nicely done 🙂 I had to read it a couple of times to get it 😉
LikeLike
Thanks Sylvia! I ran it past my husband, Sparky, and it took him 2 guesses! His first guess was a zipper but on further reflection changed his answer….
LikeLike
I was going to say a pair reading Glasses …
LikeLike
Hehe! A good guess but no. Buttons for the win! I suppose the materials confused some people (at least that was the effect on my husband)!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I happened to be cleaning my glasses at the time….
LikeLike
Hehe! The power of suggestion!
LikeLiked by 1 person
It took me a while to guess! Awesome riddle poem.
LikeLike
Yay! Tanmay I’m tickled you got it! I had to really think about this one but the clincher was when I thought of all the metaphorical buttons my siblings found to push… And it did push me over the edge as a child!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Clearly, I have no imagination; I had to wait for the answer. Surprisingly I’m pretty good at Wordle…at least that’s what they tell me in a effort to get me to subscribe.
LikeLike
I tried to give lots of clues but it was more difficult for some and easier for others… I refuse to “pay to play” online games!
LikeLike
I know, right?! I can waste enough time on the free versions. I wish I had a dollar for every hour I’ve wasted on Spider Solitaire.
LikeLike
hehe! Before they discontinued it I was playing Panda Mahjong!
LikeLike
Good take on the old button 🙂
LikeLike
Thanks bunches AJ! I’m glad you thought is good!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I didn’t get it. I was stumped and had to read the answer. Very good!
LikeLike
Thanks Brandon!! I thought it might be too easy but I’m glad it stumped a couple people to balance the few others who got it right away!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Good one! 😀 I’m so impressed. How does one write a riddle poem
LikeLike
Sangeetha! I’m tickled you are impressed!! My process was not as agonizing as writing the AI prompt. The hard part was coming up with a subject. I had considered beer but it went flat after 2 lines. There was the possibility of a dog but that idea felt like I was barking up the wrong tree… I finally found a subject for the riddle that had all the components – a familiar object, lots of attributes to list, had at least one metaphorical reference, and lent itself to rhyme. So that’s how the button became the object of this poem. Of course the rhyme was just because I chose rhyming couplets… I could have done a shadorma or even a sonnet!
LikeLike
Hahaha Please do write the one with the beer…Cheers to you Val 🍻
LikeLike
Ha! I’ll consider it but the riddle was a tough one to do…
LikeLike
You did it well
LikeLike
Thanks bunches!!
LikeLike
Excellent job…I couldn’t even begin to think how to do this. But you are a good problem-solver. (K)
LikeLike
Thanks Kerfe! I just broke the process down for Sangeetha. It didn’t hurt that my sons were sitting at the kitchen table helping me brainstorm!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice one! I am not sure how to go about the riddle poem, but I enjoyed yours!
LikeLike
Sarah I broke down my process for Sangeetha in the comments… writing the poem wasn’t the hard part. It was coming up with the subject of the riddle that was agonizing. I sat on it for several days mulling and pondering and finally brainstorming with the sons.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I could see that! I ended up sitting this one out, but it was fun to see others’ riddles.
LikeLike
I considered not doing it after struggling but I’m not a quitter so once I started I just powered through. Some of the other riddles were really good and others were great…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow, I actually figured this one out! Go me 😀
❤
David
LikeLike
Woot!! I’m pleased! Seems it was easy for some and difficult for others.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well done. You got that prompt all buttoned up!
LikeLike
Hehe! Thanks for the pun/comment~ I’m smiling now!
LikeLike
Lol I saw the first comment.
LikeLike
Glad you could get a laugh out of this one!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Button!
Great rhyme riddle 💕
LikeLike
Thanks bunches Lesley!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love all of your riddles and this one is no exception.
LikeLike
Thanks bunches Cindy! I was happy with it. Some were really hard to guess but mine was fairly easy…
LikeLiked by 1 person
you’re most welcome!!!👏
LikeLike
😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Buttons, of course-though I’ve yet to encounter one made of bone.
LikeLike
I have a couple buttons from my civil war re-enacting days….
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hey Muri, loved this poem! I’ve been away a while. My phone’s memory got overfull and I had to dump some apps (including–gulp!!!–WordPress). I bought a new phone with a lot more memory and I’m up and running again. As for riddle poems, here’s an oldie but goodie from the JustJoan archives: https://justjoan42.wordpress.com/2016/03/20/a-springtime-riddle/. Will you be doing a poetry challenge in April?
LikeLike
JOAN!!! I’m so happy to see you back on WP! Yes of course I’m hosting a scavenger Hunt! I will be posting the info on March 31st….
LikeLiked by 1 person